Fly on the Wall

Fly on the Wall

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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You never know...

"
The fly on the wall
He saw it all,
His peepers are small, it's true 
But his eyes never lie
And his memory's spry ~
And now he's got something on you! 

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Random silly thoughts today...

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did you know that a fly sees in many colors and many facets? every picture tells a story, don't it? nice one Rita, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


quinfinn

11 Years Ago

well, consider the source, flies do eat feces.....
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Yes, that's true - and much of what they experience from that wall is bullshit...
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

oh, how true......everywhere.
Eavesdropping , spying where someone knows all the truth about us and holds it against us...A very creative write and enjoyable...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Yep - gotta watch out for these! Thanks, Sami!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

True...You are welcome...:)
I love your ability to create little pearls of wisdom that can provoke both thought and laughter is such tight controlled pieces. Well done. As always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Steve! This really made me smile! :)
Good thing flies can't talk eh? My mother always told me it was 'a little bird' that told...dang nature! Good one Rita.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Yes, Nature always knows... (so do mothers...) :) Thanks, Frieda!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Lol yes we do ;-) My pleasure Rita!

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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