Fly on the Wall

You never know...

The fly on the wall

He saw it all,

His peepers are small, it's true 

But his eyes never lie

And his memory's spry ~

And now he's got something on you! 

Author's Note

Random silly thoughts today...

Reviews

[s y e]

Ha, your rhymes are so cute! ;-P This kinda made me giggle, I loved it! :D

~ Noodle.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thank you - glad to give a giggle!

[Stella Armour]

made me shiver..lol. Wonderful penning and imagination Rita..

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha... Beware the meddlesome fly! Thanks, Stella!

[John Lauterbach]

It's why we kill 'em! Leave no witnesses to how we sing in the shower!

I like the language in the third line with the peepers, but something about it isn't flowing with me. Would moving the 'it's true' to the beginning of the line work?

That's it, great quick read.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, John. I'll look at that line; I need the "it's true" at the end to rhyme with "you". Maybe I'll change the word "peepers".

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this poem made me think of the janitor in Breakfast Club...how he said he was the eyes and ears of the school..he was everywhere and had so much on all these kids..:)

the fly does too, and if he doesn't get swatted first, he may tell.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Love that movie - yes, that janitor really was their fly on the wall! Thanks, Jacob!

[Angel]

I have posted my rebuttal on my page...
I love this nonsense piece.
You are a treasure, my friend...a source of smiles for me, and I'm sure, for everyone who knows you.
Your kids are sure lucky to have such a bright and happy teacher!!

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Thank you so much, Angel! The kids certainly make me laugh, so I try to return the favor. Can't wait to read your piece!

[Angel]

Ha! You knew I'd have a rebuttal...

[Rogue]

Well it's got 30 days at best to spill it's guts on something besides the roast beef. :D

Love how you put these rhymes together. Seems so effortless. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes, that fly may have a long memory, but not a long existence! Thank you, Rogue! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

"I got 96 tears and 96 eyes" The Cramps, Human Fly. Great fly rhyme Rita

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Thanks, Mark!

[Dr. Wood ?]

pretty good random thoughts..not silly at all. I loved it

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Doc!