Fly on the Wall

You never know...

The fly on the wall

He saw it all,

His peepers are small, it's true 

But his eyes never lie

And his memory's spry ~

And now he's got something on you! 

Author's Note

Random silly thoughts today...

Reviews

[Angi]

So true! Someone is always watching!

[Rita L. Sev]

That's why I am always on my best behavior!

[DCT ponderings]

But if only he could talk. :) very fun.

[Rita L. Sev]

Probably a good thing he can't... ;) Thanks!

[DCT ponderings]

too true. :)

[chicagogirlonce]

Cute--made me smile! Thanks for that.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thanks, Girl!

[Androglossia]

Looks like a limerick to me. Well, don't we wish we can be a fly on the wall sometimes and know of things that aren't mean to beknown? Sounds illegal:) This poem is cute && jazzy.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Maryanne! Appreciate it!

[Androglossia]

You're welcome;)

[Mouli Banerjee]

haha this is very funny and clever! and an interesting literal and literary representation of the 'fly on the wall' technique. i enjoyed it a lot.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for stopping by, Mouli! Glad you enjoyed!

[richom]

Just noticed the review I just sent. I really do know how to spell "mind." Oops. Richard

[Rita L. Sev]

Typos - the bane of our existence! :)

[richom]

Very clever. Great rhyme and rythym. Will no doubt come to mine from now on whenever a fly appears.

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes - do not trust those flies! Thanks, Rich!

[Marie]

A limerick...I don't see them often, and generally not good ones. This one is.

[Rita L. Sev]

Sort of a limerick - not quite the same rhyme scheme. Thank you!

[SyberRose]

A WONDERFUL limerick Rita...nicely done...Rose

[Rita L. Sev]

Not sure this qualifies as a true limerick, but I thank you!

[SyberRose]

well it sounded like one if not one ha

[Holly Mason]

what a punk...always flying around being a twit
well the I.R.S. should of known he would tell!!hahahahhaha
forgot the word spry - so I thank ya cause that is a super fun word
truly adorable word smile
thank you for sharing fine lady

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Holly! Glad you enjoyed! :)