Missing You

senryu

The hole in my heart

floods with memories of you

but is still hollow

Reviews

[quinfinn]

perhaps there is my father in this. perhaps my mother. perhaps my soulmate or those cousins and siblings and friends......don't know for sure, but you slayed me. tears and smiles.....

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Quin - this is why we do this - for the tears, the smiles, and the kinship.

[quinfinn]

well done

[Stella Armour]

oh yes, i like this little senryu Rita, i would think many of us can relate to the emotions it portrays in so few words..

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you Stella

[Marie]

Memories are not filling are they?

[Rita L. Sev]

Nope. Like cotton candy - sweet, but not filling at all.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree. After reading this it keep resonating in the ears. Powerful...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you so much, Sami...

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Jack...]

If she only knew...very nice Rita.

[Rita L. Sev]

He - my Dad is on my mind today... Thanks, Jack.

[Jack...]

Sorry Rita, I put it the context of my thoughts.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ah - missing is missing, isn't it?

[Jack...]

A very deep and real pain

[Frieda P]

You're killing me today Rita! This one resonates in my bones....lovely Senryu, says so much.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Frieda - one more today - I promise it will be a bit more upbeat!

[Frieda P]

Promise?

[s y e]

Awwwww, this is like how I'm feeling now after finding out my Dad wont be home soon. He's the missing piece in my heart right now, I miss him dearly. You're getting me all emotional, haa.

-Noodle

[Rita L. Sev]

Not my usual emotions, but I'll lighten up in a bit, I promise! Thanks!

[s y e]

Ha, don't worry. You need to express your feelings. It helps.

Anytime.