Platitudes

Platitudes

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
"

Literature is the orchestration of platitudes. - Thornton Wilder

"

Nothing to fear but fear itself

What doesn’t kill us makes us stronger

Buying these trite sentiments

Makes moving on take longer

 

Time, it heals all of your wounds

Good things, if you just wait

So we should just sit idly

Not affecting our own fate?

 

Everything happens for a reason

Always darkest before the dawn

Said in times of hardship,

But joy and hope, still gone

 

It does not help to hear these words

Our spirits not emboldened

When you are at a loss for words,

Try this one: Silence is golden

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Heard 'em all - said 'em all.

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This is a beautiful poem, but I would have given it a six syllable cadence if I had written it myself. Here's an example that's close in meaning to your first verse. This verse has six syllables in each line with all accents matching in meter. I overlapped rhyme. You may keep this verse as your own. I won't add more verses because this is your brilliant poetic idea, and not mine. You may sing this verse as a song: (Perhaps I should write songs instead of poems?)

"Nothing to fear but fear."
"Hardships make us stronger."
Quoting words filled with cheer
make us cope much longer.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Aethereal. I enjoyed your verse - I see what you mean.



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LOL killer last line, I so agree, when someone tells me 'this too shall pass' I go ballistic and want to break something, usually over their head. ;-) Great one, muchly enjoyed it Rita!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Yes - of course it will pass, but right now I feel like s**t and you telling me not to feel this way.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Exactly! I'll try that next time and save the dishes. ;-)
Me too, but not as well as you have my friend. This is nice Rita, what prompted this?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I think it was hearing that damn Kelly Clarkson song... Thanks, Jack!
Jack...

11 Years Ago

And thank you Rita, now I have that song stuck in my head. :)
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Haha! "...Stand a little taller, doesn't mean I'm lonely when I'm alone...!" :)

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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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