I really like the formatting for this....descending as things get bigger..
like devolving...but there's a breaking point in everything and things cycle...there's always growth, hopefully as you said in more good ways than bad...clever write!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, K - I believe in our growth - it is slow, but there is always hope...
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All it takes is a ripple in the pond to start a tidal wave on the other side of the world...or so my grandmother used to say. I liked this one; a good metaphor for humanity, and the way that things run in cycles--hopefully we are nearing a cycle of understanding and greater empathy. Nicely written, Rita.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Amen to that, Sarah... if not for our generation, then maybe the next... Thank you for your insights.. read moreAmen to that, Sarah... if not for our generation, then maybe the next... Thank you for your insights.
Ah... The expanding universe theory...
You explain the greatest tool to defy the principles of entropy.
I think you could write thus poem backwards as well.
Good job.
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