McWorld

Where we may be heading

Walking through the McWorld today

I started to McWonder

How long before the McSkies are filled

With patented McThunder

Quite soon the McSun will be shining down

On McFields of bland McFlowers

And we'll be measuring McTime in 

Corporate-approved McHours

The McRocks of McEarth will be uniform chunks

Of carefully portioned McGranite

And we'll all be blissfully happy

On our tasteless little McPlanet 

Reviews

[Rogue]

Ever play Sim City? The ultimate goal is to evolve and all the populace to move into the self sustainable tower structures (where nothing outside is any longer needed). Definitely a suitable setting for your McWorld. How else could such places be inside? Scary where time may lead us...

Very thought provoking read, Rita. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Yep - I've seen Sim City... and it gets closer every day... Thanks, Rogue!

[OBWhiteHawk]

Awesome, me and some friends refer to the "McDonaldization of the world" so I can really understand where you are going with this for sure. A great statement on a pathetic situation.

[Rita L. Sev]

Exactly. Thanks, OBWH!

[Mizo4]

nice poem , interesting, :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

Great concept for a poem with great rhymes.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thanks, Mark.

[closed]

interesting concept for a poem
i wonder if your other works are this unique
good write

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you for reading. Some of my works are quite unique, many are quirky, and I'm sure that some are run-of-the mill pieces that gave me something to write that particular day. :)

[Melanie Genevieve]

:D ah I love this concept. Sad but really clever and fun to read! teehee

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, Melanie! Sad that it may come to this - but I like to see the humor wherever I can. :) Glad you enjoyed this!

[Marie]

The McLife is the life for me...

[Rita L. Sev]

:) I'm more of a Salad Works kind of gal... ;)

[lee von cleef]

Mccountry boy yells a big Mc yee yee,Mc yee yee

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Thanks (McGlad you enjoyed...)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

haha that is great... love your creative twist to express how the whole world has turned corporate leaving the human emotions on the unemployment line.

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why you are most welcome.

[ba_mcfarlane]

So clever...what a neat concept!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.