My father had a sister who died when she was 9 years old; she's buried in a church cemetery near my home. Last spring, I went to the grave as I occasionally do, and saw a yellow flower placed there. A few months ago, I was there for a funeral, and saw another flower there. No other family members who know of her live nearby. No one seems to know who is placing flowers on this child's grave. And so, this poem...
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We have a little old cemetery close to our area and as old as the civil war . I used to stroll there enjoying the shades while marvelling at the huge towering Oak trees and Cedars of Lebanon . Often times I stopped and paused when I see an unmark grave especially infants or child or some unknown soldier . Thoughts sometimes rush through my mind . Not only of how they died but how they lived . Surely no one remembers that person other than the One that formed him or her from the dust . This is a heart felt and moving piece .
The eerie silence does speaks volumes . Who says dead men don't talk . ? I enjoyed this piece for it.. read moreThe eerie silence does speaks volumes . Who says dead men don't talk . ? I enjoyed this piece for it jarred something inside my subconscious memory .
Wow. So sad. Every year, our church has a graveyard mass. I always find the children's graves the hardest. Perhaps it is just someone, who, like me, is deeply touched by the death of a child. A beautiful story, and a lovely poem.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, KL. That is exactly the conclusion I have come to - someone, perhaps with a child of her.. read moreThank you, KL. That is exactly the conclusion I have come to - someone, perhaps with a child of her own in that cemetery, sees that a child is buried there, seemingly forgotten. I am grateful for such kindness shown in this world...
In every line you invoke a sense of loss tinged with grace. It moves the poem and stirs the heart. I enjoyed it and the story behind it. I am curious about who keeps leaving flowers. Much love to you and your family and thank you for this lovely poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Eddie - she was an aunt I never met, but I knew her through my grandmother. I thi.. read moreThank you so much, Eddie - she was an aunt I never met, but I knew her through my grandmother. I think it would comfort her to know that some kind soul gave her child flowers...
Great use of repetition -- like a chant of On this stone contrasting with progressive descriptions. Your note helps me with the lines "of the a soul unknown gives blooms of honey gold" My first thought was that soul of the child was somehow the cause of the blooms. Poem tells a rich story in a small package.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Ooh - I like that idea - that the child's soul blooms... Idealistic, but lovely just the same. Thank.. read moreOoh - I like that idea - that the child's soul blooms... Idealistic, but lovely just the same. Thank you, John.
What a lovely gesture from someone mourning the death of a child unknown to the mourner. Your poem is a heart-felt tribute to the child and to the person making the anonymous gifts. As usual, your poem is very well written.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you, Joyce - I am always so touched to see those flowers...
Wow, it's a mystery but at the same time this poem speaks volumes. I am sorry about your loss, especially at such a young age. You come up with some amazing, emotional, touching real pieces, it's outstanding.
~ Noodle ~
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Noodle. Though I didn't know her, I felt her loss through my grandmother. The mys.. read moreThank you so much, Noodle. Though I didn't know her, I felt her loss through my grandmother. The mystery of the flowers is a strange comfort...
Very sensitive and heart moving piece Rita. Like Renee stated, the revelation behind your inspiration adds to and helps us appreciate this one all the better.
I loved it. Very beautiful.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you, Kwiksie. This piece is close to my heart - I truly appreciate your words...
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