O, Dark Master

O, Dark Master

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
"

The best part of waking up...

"
I was only fifteen
In the beginning
My longing was deep; 
I thought I was sinning

Back then I thought
You needed much more
I'd add heavy cream
And sugar galore

Now stepping up 
To the coffee bar
I see you are perfect
Just as you are

Reaching for you
My heart just beats faster
For you, my caffeinated,
Dark-roasted master

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


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I almost thought this was going an entirely different route. Phew! But I liked it, the simplest things can be so much more, perhaps the coffee and the additives you use symbolize some advance in maturity. Eh, for some reason i feel philosophical and ranty today. Great write as always, Rita.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Yeah, nothing philosophical here - just an ode to my addiction! As you know, I write a lot abou.. read more
Will

11 Years Ago

It's kinda refreshing to find something new in the simplest of everyday activities. Anytime, Rita. K.. read more
whhooo teach wasn't sure where I was headed after that title
dang good write
it is the dark master isn't it
living dangerously at 15 you wild girl*)
from sugar to black...don't take our coffee back
this is adorable
thank you for sharing


Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Holly, for your fun and kind review! At 15, I was working in a Dunkin' Donuts, early in the.. read more
...is having' Folger's in your cup :D lol i honestly don't like coffee (i feel like a sinner when I say that reviewing a poem about coffee) but my brother's been addicted since he was seven... great ode to your master, dear. love the rhymes :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you! You'll have to share this with your brother, fellow caffeine addict :)
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

haha I will! :) you're welcome
So you "heard" the Folger's jingle echo inside too as this wound its way along the paper - or do you only keyboard (as a verb it's so more meaning-full than merely "type")?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Yes, the jingle filled my head as I pondered my affair with coffee - I guess you could say it's "our.. read more
Chris

11 Years Ago

The sound of the nib scrawling across layered parchment is memorable... few ever speak of its FEEL a.. read more
Chris

11 Years Ago

forgive fumbly fingers - beind = behind ...I actually do keyboard well but is a new and less type-s.. read more
A poem about coffee... why haven't I thought if this yet? From one coffee addict to possibly another, you brewed a very nice blend in this writing. MmmMmm good!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, HH! Yes, a fellow addict. Coffee has given so much pleasure, I thought it deserved a poem.. read more
very nicely written

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank You.
Loved the "Dark Roast Master" line,I love a good Coffee, enjoyed reading this a lot :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
A poem that hits the mark for me!

Posted 11 Years Ago


all hail dark roast! i feel you 100% in this one! what a clever and quirky little write...charming!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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