I almost thought this was going an entirely different route. Phew! But I liked it, the simplest things can be so much more, perhaps the coffee and the additives you use symbolize some advance in maturity. Eh, for some reason i feel philosophical and ranty today. Great write as always, Rita.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Ha! Yeah, nothing philosophical here - just an ode to my addiction! As you know, I write a lot abou.. read moreHa! Yeah, nothing philosophical here - just an ode to my addiction! As you know, I write a lot about simple, everyday things. Thanks, Will!
11 Years Ago
It's kinda refreshing to find something new in the simplest of everyday activities. Anytime, Rita. K.. read moreIt's kinda refreshing to find something new in the simplest of everyday activities. Anytime, Rita. Keep on writing!
whhooo teach wasn't sure where I was headed after that title
dang good write
it is the dark master isn't it
living dangerously at 15 you wild girl*)
from sugar to black...don't take our coffee back
this is adorable
thank you for sharing
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks, Holly, for your fun and kind review! At 15, I was working in a Dunkin' Donuts, early in the.. read moreThanks, Holly, for your fun and kind review! At 15, I was working in a Dunkin' Donuts, early in the mornings. There was plenty of coffee there, and one thing led to another... ;)
...is having' Folger's in your cup :D lol i honestly don't like coffee (i feel like a sinner when I say that reviewing a poem about coffee) but my brother's been addicted since he was seven... great ode to your master, dear. love the rhymes :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you! You'll have to share this with your brother, fellow caffeine addict :)
So you "heard" the Folger's jingle echo inside too as this wound its way along the paper - or do you only keyboard (as a verb it's so more meaning-full than merely "type")?
Yes, the jingle filled my head as I pondered my affair with coffee - I guess you could say it's "our.. read moreYes, the jingle filled my head as I pondered my affair with coffee - I guess you could say it's "our song". About keyboarding, I must use a pen and paper to compose. I just have to feel the words flowing from the pen to be truly connected to them.
11 Years Ago
The sound of the nib scrawling across layered parchment is memorable... few ever speak of its FEEL a.. read moreThe sound of the nib scrawling across layered parchment is memorable... few ever speak of its FEEL as the vibrations flow through the fingertips and back beind the eyes. My avatar is quite real as well. Renaissance Fairs are storytelling occasions.
11 Years Ago
forgive fumbly fingers - beind = behind ...I actually do keyboard well but is a new and less type-s.. read moreforgive fumbly fingers - beind = behind ...I actually do keyboard well but is a new and less type-sensitive one.
A poem about coffee... why haven't I thought if this yet? From one coffee addict to possibly another, you brewed a very nice blend in this writing. MmmMmm good!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you, HH! Yes, a fellow addict. Coffee has given so much pleasure, I thought it deserved a poem.. read moreThank you, HH! Yes, a fellow addict. Coffee has given so much pleasure, I thought it deserved a poem (or two...). Thanks for reading!
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