O, Dark Master

O, Dark Master

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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The best part of waking up...

"
I was only fifteen
In the beginning
My longing was deep; 
I thought I was sinning

Back then I thought
You needed much more
I'd add heavy cream
And sugar galore

Now stepping up 
To the coffee bar
I see you are perfect
Just as you are

Reaching for you
My heart just beats faster
For you, my caffeinated,
Dark-roasted master

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


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Coffee can be as much of an addiciotn as anything else.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Yes, it certainly can... :)
I do so love your way of thinking. Ha! Dark master indeed...
You even got in a little guilty rebellion as well. I can relate so well to the restrictions of lifestyle.
Fun read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thanks, David - I actually gave up coffee when I made some major changes in my diet, but went back.... read more
Ive always been a tea drinker...hot and iced. But lately ive developed a taste for iced coffee. Who knows I may work my way to the dark stuff. Lol... ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Ha! Yes, it is an acquired taste, but once acquired... Tea soothes me at night, but coffee gets me .. read more
An anthem for all who rely upon their java jolts to get started each day. I too began with sugar, but now take it without, as nature intended. "Dark-roasted master" is a splendid ending.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Rich! Coffee and poetry are my weaknesses!
A perky little ditty about Mr. Coffee, Ritty! Oh, oh, guess I got a bit carried away with the rhyme there, Rita. :) You have written another delightful poem. It's always a lot of fun to read your work. Thanks for another smile!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Joyce! I am always so happy to see that my poems make people smile!
An enjoyable piece ! I did not expect it to be about coffee , so the end was a bit surprising.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Thank you, FD! I write about a lot of everyday things. :)
Moon

11 Years Ago

Your welcome and really ? I love to write , but I honestly haven't been writing very much lately.
Would you believe if I said right now I was drinking coffee? Lol! This is amazing, coffee is amazing....... -daydreams about coffee- hahaha

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Yes, I believe it! It is almost 10pm here, so I will have to dream of it til morning... :)
Though I don't drink coffee, this is a great piece and I love that title!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

:) Thank you, Travis!
Tea is my drink of choice..but this is a Very creative musing for coffee..I am guessing this write alone will drive coffee drinkers to a cup !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I do believe it already has... Thank you, Renee!
Renée

11 Years Ago

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COFFEE COFFEE COFFEE COFFEE COFFEE COFFEE COFFEE COFFEE COFFEECOFFEECOFFEECOFFEEEEEEEEEEE

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I am so sorry to be teasing you like this, Angel! :)
Angel

11 Years Ago

JAVAJAVAJAVAJAVAJAVAJAVAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!
Angel

11 Years Ago

The heart doc said NO CAFFEINE...and I've been a fairly good li'l girl. No soda, no coffee. I can .. read more

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