Who?

Who?

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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A universal sentiment, I'm certain

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I don't know who I am sometimes
Do others feel this too?
I think I'm being scrutinized,
An animal caged in a zoo
Even worse, sometimes
It seems to be
That no one cares
To look at me

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Slightly deeper than my usual

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I can relate to this. You speak for everyone who has experienced these feelings. So, I guess the answer to your question is, YES. It's ok to be deep...those words come from the soul.

Posted 11 Years Ago


So many interpretations. So many truths.
Way to strike a nerve with such a short piece.
Great writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It does feel like we get lost in the world and lose ourselves too sometimes... Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rita L. Sev
Rita L. Sev

Philadelphia, PA



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