The Busy Pen

The Busy Pen

A Poem by Rita L. Sev
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A day in the life of my busy ball-point.

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The Busy Pen

Today I did a cryptogram
Composed a poem, took an exam
Jotted down a list for the store
Authored a novel, tallied a score
Wrote a letter to my best friend
Proofread a story from beginning to end
Scheduled things to do next week
Addressed invitations, wrote a speech
Put a memo on my bulletin board - 
The pen IS mightier than the sword! 

© 2013 Rita L. Sev


Author's Note

Rita L. Sev
Had a conversation with a colleague the other day about how I still compose EVERYTHING (stories, poems, lesson plans, lists, tests...) in longhand. While I am grateful for technology, I need to feel the pen in my hand, the shape of the words, for the work to be truly 'mine'.

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dear friend Rita ... i think there is much more in this expression than a pen in hand ... how busy can it get? with a volcanic reminder
"The pen IS mightier than the sword! "
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

I could measure the business of a day with the level of ink in my pen... Thanks so much, E!
This is so true! And very relateable too.
Though, i can't deny, i'm a huge fan of the keys on my laptop when it comes to doing projects or writing stories and what not; no gadget can replace my poetry book however...none i can think of at least. ;)
Nice write great 'penner'. lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

:) Thanks, Kwiksie!
I admire ya. I am hooked on the net book -- that writer's callous on my middle finger is almost gone after 5 years of not really writing longhand ...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Ha! Well, whatever works for you! It certainly would take up less space and paper if I could learn.. read more
It warms my heart to hear this Rita haha I feel the exact same way...I don't type anything until I have a finished piece, I absolutely must write on paper. Sometimes that means staring at a blank page for long stretches of time (for as long as an hour and maybe more) but that's my element. My pen is indeed my sword...great piece :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Steve. I know what you mean about staring at the page... but the page is warmer and more .. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Oh it is, without question ;)
I agree! I love the way different pens look different ways and so much more personal than any typed paper. I also really enjoyed your poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Cristiberry - I appreciate it!
Ah this is a unique treat . I don't think it will be ever replace by modern technology. If Pen is ever abolish or went extinct then so as our post office .

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

I could never give up my pen... it is a part of me. Thanks for finding this one, Neil!
NeiL ArandA

11 Years Ago

Your welcome ! It reminds me of someone or something, like the Pad.
You are such a talent with clear and great ideas. Did I stroke your ego enough? Haha

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

:) Thanks, Mike!
I use a very sharp pencil to write. I cannot do it on the computer! So strange. Loved this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

:) I have "low vision", so it is difficult to see pencil... Black ink on yellow legal pads preferred.. read more
Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Paper what's that? I've transitioned completely to the smartphone.
Where can I buy such a pen Rita ? ;)
I probably couldn't afford one though - it seems like you - priceless
X

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Ha! Thank you, kind sir! Your pen gets around pretty well, too!
i like the feel of the pen in hand, also...not a big technology lover...even though the computer makes some things easier...i really appreciated this write.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

Glad you could relate to this Jacob - I get a lot of flack for refusing to go completely "paper-and-.. read more

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