Unique

Happiness in it's entirety,
Has hidden itself so well,
Never has it shown itself to man,
For fear that he would tell.
If he saw more than a peek,
How terrible it would be!
Not precious at all--but known to many,
Then Give me misery.

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

It certainly is a unique musing.

[Moflo]

This was an interesting theory put into a short, to the point and well paced poem. I like this outlook a lot. Nice write.

[Steve]

There is great wisom here! Nice job.

[Rhonda]

good job! this is excellent! thnx :D

[Antonio Valentino]

Unique is you alright, in every good way possible.
How've you been my dear, I hope all's been well.
The breeze brought me back here, and I just wanted to
say hello, and tell you that you've been missed.

You'll always be,
the bird in my sky.

Always,
Rich