Short Stack #1

originally on poetry.com; playing with feelings ...;

... sitting ... 
... rocking ... 
... thinking ... 
... wondering ... 
... smiling ... 
... remembering ... 
... longing ... 
... misting ... 
... sighing ... 
... appreciating ... 
... knowing ... 
... inhaling ... 
... l i n g e r i n g . . . 
. . . fading ... 
... ending. 

Reviews

[Roland]

original reviews from poetry.com ....

well done, nice job
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 532 days ago
well done, nice job
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I liked it
Tammy Tadlock1003 days ago
nice!
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ari karchmer1003 days ago
poem is very relatable and takes the reader through an adventure. However, it seems as though it is lacking effort. could have been written in 3 minutes
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Roland Aucoin1003 days ago
... actually, it took less than that ... and I do not mean to be snooty. It is just the way it happened.
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