Vampire's Charm

a sonnet aboout... Vampires

      Vampire’s Charm 

Her shining ice blue eyes like sharp kunai

hair as ebony as a starless night 

glossy scarlet lips that will always lie;

hide blood-sucking fangs that are pearly white

A lacy necklace round her pale fair skin 

a smile creeps along her unearthly face

try to tame her but you can’t ever win

she’ll leave you dead without even a trace

Sepheria Sepheria is she 

a cat woman who plays with men like mice

no one can escape her including me

when she catches you your skin will she slice

Watch out for vampires both night and in day

Goddess like women will lead you astray 

Reviews

[Juliet]

Dah! What is it about rhyming poems that just rock my socks? I don't know but even some rhyming poems can be terrible. Yours was NOT one of the terrible ones. You're choice of words throughout the poem was perfect and seemed very... Vampire like? Haha I don't know how to say that. Finally also not a vampire poem about the sexy guy vampire. This one was about lady vampires. (Which also rocks my socks). Awesome awesome work I think I'll read more from you :)

[khalid]

that is really nice. although you are still young, you are promising poet. keep on

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is really good I like the way you wrote this. especially for someone your age.