Atum

The title is pretty much sums it up

Crisp autumn air, the air before winter. 

When the world prepares for darkness.

Watch the grave yards, silent, still, never daring to move

Leaves falling, death coming, with the cold winter approaching. 

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

I was just thinking this today, as if for the first time, and here you have written it in a velvet orange. Awesome word play on the spelling of the title, really smart.

[pixieheart97]

The colour fits perfectly with the theme..it's interesting to see your view on autumn..I love it but thats just cuz I was born in autumn haha..I love how it's so short and sweet but it's still so powerful and meaningful

[EricGodsil]

It was a whimsical poem. I enjoyed the color of the text as well. Gave it a certain aesthetic quality. I enjoyed the details expressed in such a minimum way. Poignant.