Where, for us?

A simple love poem; trying to write differently than normal.

Where else could we sleep?
  Where else could we dream?

   Together I wish;
                    This love will take all we have,
         Knowing you don't have to worry,
                      No longer have to wait
                           To see the light of the day
                              Blossom from precious time
                With one breath, I tremble;
                            With one kiss, you crumble;
             Melting and molding we move.
                                    

                               And so I ask:
    What more could I dream of?

Author's Note

Tell me what you think, thanks for reading~

Reviews

[Who Cares]

You clearly display the love between a couple. Your words are simple nothing complex though these words are still os very powerful. This love is unbreakable and pure, I got butterflies in my tummy when I read this, nice work.

[Warren L.G De Mills]

This is pretty real. Many couples feel this sort of thing I know I've had that feeling before. good write