New Atlantis

So I like to linger around the “unreviewed” section of this universe and this has been on the list for forever. I finally gave in to my curiosity and clicked in. I was more than a little shocked to find that it had reviews. I’m guessing this is another glitch of the site since it’s not being maintained. Hopefully a more recent date will allow actually unreviewed things to come to the top since this has actually received feedback.

Posted 1 Month Ago

Ahhhhh... what's the thudding noise??

Anyways, this was an interesting piece. I liked how you did millions of flashbacks - it was very unique and complex, yet you managed to construct flashbacks so that were easy enough to follow. Good work, but I am dying to know why he jumped off the boat... lol.

Posted 17 Years Ago