Unspoken

Sometimes you are left with memories and unspoken words.

I lived in your smile,

I shined when you laughed,

It was you!

My mere existence,

It is you!

who pushed me aside,

You were my sun I revolved around,

Now,I'm nothing but a shooting star.

They say.... time heals,

What if I say.... I'm just a paradox.

I wish... I had said all this to you,

But now, I'm only left with pangs of my own conscience.

Author's Note

my first piece of poetry....your remarks would be helpful.

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow! This is intense and moving!
I liked how the simple, plain words are soo very well framed and plotted to create this awe inspiring piece!
Kudos! I enjoyed reading it very much.

[Moizz]

thank you very much! :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome!