Love to unconsciousness

Love to unconsciousness

A Story by Ring

The moonlight shimmered upon the raft. The calm waves gently touched the wood as I kissed the love of my life. Jenny Rodgers. I prayed to father time to keep me in this moment ; us in this moment forever.
But then the raft was jolted and we drew back.
"Chris, what was that?!", "I'm not sure Jenny, but whatever it is, it's coming from the bottom of the boat".
I took off my clothes and dived in to the water. It was freezing cold. I swam around the boat but I couldn't see anything. *Bang*. "Chris, are you ok!?. I couldn't feel anything. My world was turning black until the point I couldn't see. I knew I was falling deeper and deeper to the bottom of the lake. Then I saw it.

© 2019 Ring


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Ring
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First story so, don't judge to much xx

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Added on March 25, 2019
Last Updated on March 25, 2019
Tags: Lake, death, Chris, Jenny, raft

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Ring
Ring

Dunblane, Central, United Kingdom



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