Rewind

Rewind

A Poem by Riina
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Things always used to be so perfect,

Not a care in the world because nothing could tear us apart,

But sadly this day of love turned upside down,

And I left crying with the world's biggest frown.

 

Somebody, somebody lemme rewind, turn back time to the afternoon,

Somebody, somebody lemme rewind, and undo all this misery.

 

You know I know this was my fault,

Yet somehow there isn't a way to fix this disaster,

All i can do is watch as you fade,

Into the darkness I always fear.

 

Somebody, somebody lemme rewind, turn back time to colder snowy days,

Somebody, somebody lemme rewind, back to days when I saw your smile.

 

I, can't take this, anymore,

Please just turn back the time,

End this nightmare and bring back my light,

Bring back the blue sky caused by his heart.

 

....Rewind....

 

Somebody, somebody lemme rewind, back to the day we met face to face,

Somebody somebody lemme rewind, back to the time you left me speechless.

 

Somebody, somebody lemme rewind, end this pain, take me back to summer,

Back to the days where we first began, Back to the days where I can keep from hurting you now.

 

Rewind time...

 

Rewrite the wrong, just Rewind....

© 2009 Riina


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This is a heartfelt piece wanting to rewind time to heal the hurts that have happend. Unfortuantely time does not rewind... but moves forward. So one can only take steps to heal the past and move on to the present.. whatever steps those may be and hopefully those frown will turn back upside down inot smiles again!! :) An emotional ink..

On a writer's note: I did spot a typo. In the second main stanza? Should it be "You know, I know..." ?



Posted 15 Years Ago


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This is a heartfelt piece wanting to rewind time to heal the hurts that have happend. Unfortuantely time does not rewind... but moves forward. So one can only take steps to heal the past and move on to the present.. whatever steps those may be and hopefully those frown will turn back upside down inot smiles again!! :) An emotional ink..

On a writer's note: I did spot a typo. In the second main stanza? Should it be "You know, I know..." ?



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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