An Evening Shower

An attempt to capture the feelings of a evening shower.

My Evening Shower

 

The shower water flows, softly,

Warmly, around, and down my

Supplicant body... healing and cleaning...

 

Turned low, the endless droplets transport

Me to a needed peace, a quiet union of body and spirit

As I surrender to this wet enclosure.

 

Time is lost in such a naked retreat, the water,

A loving, and holding mother. I feel so loved and complete

For such is the essence of slow evening water...

 

 

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Reviews

[John A Common]

A wonderfull poem. I love your style of writing,your point of view is always interisting. Great job.

[Jetta Zippora]

This is a unique and sparkling write! I love it! :)