my woman...

10-40 challenge

 

 

[b]she came [u]lightly[/u] in dreams

[u]layered [/u]clothe she felt so soft

in the [u]darkness[/u] 

each sheet [u]flashes[/u]  beauty

 

the envious kalakuchi [u]branches[/u]

hissed with [u]wet stirring shiver[/u]

 witnessing the intimacy of our love 

my passion [u]remains[/u] my [u]woman[/u][/b] 

 

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

'She came lightly in dreams/layered clothe, she felt so soft/in the darkness/each sheet flashes beauty' Awesome verse Rey...miss your words from a warrior...Thank you always for serving...I salute you, Sir.

[Helena]

Truly beautiful Rey. Really not sure why this is happening, but I will mail
you. ~ Helena

[Rey]

can someone help me edit the scribble, THNX!

[Charles D. Moorer]

This is a short but powerful piece. Visually, something must have happened when you copied or transferred the piece because you have some unintended symbols in the poem. Or are the symbols intentional?