impulse...

"quitters never win..."

 

"i'll wager with the cards i am dealt

with naked guts and shear impulse

let the cards fall where they may

win or loss, i know i played fair..."

 

my house of haiku & senryu III

51
willing to transform
negative things to positive
goodness end result

52
those who have courage
commitment and discipline
can follow their dreams

53
bring rest of the world
those who choose to do their best
to live better life

54
mainstream unfairness
for those who preach hopelessness
impede will to rise

55
to make life better
blood sweat and tears sacrificed
let destiny leads

56
obssessed with the past
those with negative belief
focus obstructed

57
toward the bright light
positive thinkers move on
where life gets better

58
specific purpose
thoughts and action are all clear
stay~be consistent

59
the pathways i choose
is which way i go not where
hold on tight with faith

60
the next step i take
decides what i truly want
it's my life to live

61
know that there's a way
to start my journey in time
formulate good plan

62
specific purpose
thoughts and actions considered
vivid~consistent

63
purpose fulfillment
comes closer in every breath
fix my sight on course

64
trivial occurence
sometimes causes frustration
simply let it go

65
in my little ways
being in control of self
greater things happen

66
at any moment
when mind changed feelings followed
show 'em who i am

67
things that sorround me
connect possibilities
resist bad karma

68
vizualize details
imagine what can be done
find the steps to take

69
the very best action
is to accept what's the truth
then do what i will

70
accept all that comes
and choose to find true values
ne'er impose jugdment

71
reasons for living
resonate life through goodness
listen to echoes

72
see its real image
reflection of self esteem
life's beauty appears

73
imagining fear
with ambiguous motives
progress' detractor

74
source of enjoyment
important things come to mind
yet outside of me

75
letting go of things
impeeding to move forward
yoke becomes lighter

 

aloha!

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

I Loved all your Haikus and Senryu, 51, 53, 56, 57, 61, 64, shoot, ALL OF THEM were great...Miss you my friend, I'm rusty in my Hawaiin Pidgen, I Miss Hawaii.

You got da kine, Bruddah, Howzit? Your poem broke da mout, Really da sweet...Mahalo Rey, I'm sure you are still writing in SC.

Thank you for your service, Sir.