THE MASTER KEY

Feeling like from the bottom I'm the one always looking up. To the untold answers. I just can't get enough.

So many closed minds. Tell me I'll never measure up. To them all I have to say is open your eyes and buckle up.

From deep within my soul. I have always known. I'm here for much more. Sit back and watch my story unfold.

Just because a person can't see past their nose. Doesn't mean I'm just like them. I've always been in the know.

Above them my story will always be told. From the beginning. To where there's no end. For me is how it goes.

From west to east dies the old ways. South to north is the direction my thoughts have always portrayed.

Let alone the particulars. In your mind it's not how my story will unfold.

As I let go of the strings. The ones that were tied to my dreams. Keeping them down has all been but a screen.

Now u can see. My location is taking me to my destiny. Where I can begin to live my life in true harmony.

Best believe what u see. Has always been apart of me. I believe you've always known. That's why you tried tying me down.

In my heart I believe. You meant no harm. Believing differently. Is the key that will set me free.

Reviews

[Richard M]

Nice poem Tara and understand the emotion and drive it portrays. All I can say is, Go girl!! In critiquing your poem; for me, the lines are long and was hard for the eye to track and maintain the rhythum. Just a gentle suggestion my friend, why not cut the lines in two and rhyme in a 2 and 4 rythum? Maybe a few too many full stops also; one thought is told over two sentences. But love the poem.

[Tara Marie]

Well hello there Richard. Thanks for your kind and wisdom lead words. I must answer your question. I in particular have always had my own style of writing and rhyming. As you see my pieces are a cross between telling an in depth story with the essence of poetry spicing things up. However I understand your points an sound advice.. N its all something I will keep in mind when putting together my upcoming pieces. Thank you so much. Take care

[Richard M]

Thank you Tara for understanding my thoughts. Keep writing, love your work! 😊

[Tony]

Changing our points of views or our attitudes about life is definitely liberating. I enjoyed your work, thank you for sharing it here.

[Tara Marie]

Thank you for spending the time reviewing my poem. Glad you enjoyed it. Co,e again sometime. I just did a revision of one i wrote a while back. I'll be sharing it h here tonight. Its titled THE GODDESS WITHIN. Hope to see u in the reviews.. Take care

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to find the key to self-happiness. Sometime we are locked-up and we do not know. I liked the thoughts and the journey to the proper place. Thank you Tara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris]

A fair beginning and an introduction to you.

[jennifer little]

wonderful job keep up the good work and never stop writing

[Tara Marie]

Thank you Jennifer! Glad u liked this piece. N your
words are appreciated . I will always remember them

[jennifer little]

your welcome keep up the good work though you do really good on your work im slowly getting back into mine after 4 years of not being able to really write that much with my 2 year realationship i had it was really hard and so much depression i couldnt write but i got away from it and i have been slowly writing on and off for 2 years now

[BlackPrince]

This poem has a nice rhythm and flow.

[wordman]

you can be anything you desire,and those people that try to hold you down,well that`s because there closed minded

[Tara Marie]

Amen to that!

[wordman]

lol,i thought you left town