Suspect

This is a commercial for a fictional perfume/cologne brand.

Suspect By

Rïén Kelso

EXT. STREETS - NIGHT

A detective is standing out in the streets, just staring
around. He is smoking on his cigarette in the cold, thick
air. He looks tired and cold.

A woman is walking by, and he notices her. She starts to
cross the street when the detective gets a good look at her.

The detective looks on a little notepad of names and then
calls out for the girl.

                    DETECTIVE
          Excuse me, miss?

The woman looks back and sees the detective. She then drops
her bags and runs away.

The man runs after her. She is running down the street with
the detective not too close behind her. He catches up to her
and she stops. The detective grabs onto her and they gaze
into each others’ eyes.

                    GIRL
          Are you going to arrest me officer?

The detective keeps on looking in her eyes. He closes his
eyes and takes a deep breath.

PRODUCT
A bottle of Mariani brand perfume.

                    SIGN
          Suspect by Mariani

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Reviews

Oh how brilliant this is... lol, I enjoyed the ending, it says so much more in between the lines, I think, not only I catch but many other readers on here when they come by, so I keep that secret, to their imagination, but I enjoyed this new screenplay posted of you! I want to know more, on your ending, you leave us readers perfectly in yearning!!! :)

- Elisa