A Day Alone

A Day Alone

A Poem by Riddling
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A Day Alone.

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Another Day Alone

Walking Down the Road
Everyday Overthrown
By the Overgrown Toad
Another Day Alone

Watching the Stars
Adoring The Spots
Over the Bars
Making the Shots

Wishing to Postpone
The Dinner with the Beau
Another Day Alone

Crying to a Friend
Claiming to Disown
And Bring the End
Another Day Alone.

© 2016 Riddling


Author's Note

Riddling
I know, I suck, but I want to get better at poetry for the future :) Criticism is DEFINITELY welcome, I need to know exactly what I did wrong and what I did right! Did it make sense? I have no idea. THANK YOU SO MUCH, ANYONE WHO COMMENTS!!!

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Pella, IA



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