A CINDERELLA TALEA Chapter by Ridannelyn Gibs Gayares GalloA long time ago, before you and I were
born. There lived a rich man and his pregnant wife in a village near the
kingdom. The couple lived happily until the wife died of childbirth, the man
became sorrowful yet it passed away when he saw his new-born daughter’s
beautiful face. The man named his daughter Caroline after his wife, Carolina
for the babe got her mother’s beauty. Nine years later, Caroline grew into sunny-faced
girl she always played in their orchard, learning interesting things and
practicing herself being a proper young lady. Even she had everything she
wanted to do, she was feeling lonely because she was motherless, so she went to
her father and asked, “Father, can I please have a mother?” The man promised his child to give her a
mother. After many days, he remarried to Lady Triage, a family friend with two
daughters just the same of Caroline’s age by the name of Diana, the elder and
Anita, the younger. It was that time that the man died of
sickness and the step-mother finally revealed her true colors: cold, cruel and envious
same as the two step-sisters. Because of their jealousness to Caroline’s charm
and beauty, they made the little girl a servant of her own household. As the years gone by, the step-mother and
the elder step-sister still remained envious and impolite however Anita became
a quiet young woman yet she never says polite words. Even the slave of her own
house, Caroline still remained patient and kind, and the birds even the mice
were her friends. When the sun rose, the blue birds flew to the window and
opened the curtains for Caroline. “Oh, Caroline wake up, my dear. The sun finally smiles to you so clear.” Tweeted the birds and the fair maiden
finally woke up. Caroline: Oh, what a lovely dream. The blue birds: What kind of a dream? Caroline: I don’t think I should tell you. The blue birds: Why? Caroline: Because if I do it won’t come
true. When the clock stroked seven in the
morning, it rang telling Caroline to get up. She immediately jumped off from
bed and proceeded to her bathroom. When she put on her rag-dress, she swiftly
rushed downstairs to feed the farm animals. After feeding all of the animals,
three bells rang along with the calls from above “Caroline!” Caroline went inside and gathered all the
plates, cups, teas and breakfast for the two step-sisters and the step-mother.
As she went in Diana’s room and politely greeted her, “Good morning, Diana.
Sleep well?” “Why? Do you care?! Take that ironing and have it back in
an hour! One hour, you hear?” ordered Diana roughly to Caroline while she
shoved all her laundry to the poor lass. “Yes, Diana.”
Caroline said in her still patient self, as if she didn’t heard the spoiled
girl’s ruthless tone. Next, she went
in Anita’s room and greeted her politely, “Good morning,
Anita.” “Wash all my
clothes and be sure I have them dried when I call you after five minutes.”
Anita said quietly but didn’t say please. “Yes, Anita.”
Caroline said. Then finally,
she went into her step-mother’s chamber. “Good morning,
step-mother.” Caroline said in a kind greeting. “Pick up the
laundry and get on with it.” The step-mother said coldly while she took her
breakfast but didn’t help Caroline picking up her pile of clothes. “Yes,
step-mother.” Caroline said quietly and closed the door for the woman. Not too long
after Caroline went downstairs she heard a scream from above. It was Diana who
screamed. “Mother, oh
mother! Mother!” Diana continuously screamed as she went out from her bedroom. “You did it!
You did it on purpose!” Diana shouted while pointing Caroline and ran to the
step-mother’s chamber while she was screaming and shouting. “Now what
happened?” Anita asked herself ignoring Caroline as she walked passed to the
chamber. “There is a red
ant under my tea cup.” Caroline heard Diana telling her mother what troubled
her. Moments later,
the two step-sisters went out from the chamber and told Caroline that she was
been called by her step-mother. While inside in
the step-mother’s chamber, Caroline: Oh, please, you don't think that I would... Step-mother: Hold your tongue! Now, it
seems we have time on our hands. Caroline: But I don’t know… Step-mother: Silence! Perhaps we can put
it to better use. Now, let me see... There's the large carpet in the main hall-
Clean it! And the windows upstairs and down- Wash them! Oh yes, and the
tapestries and the draperies... Caroline: But I just finished... Step-mother: Do them again! And don't
forget the garden. Then scrub the terrace, sweep the halls and the stairs,
clean the chimneys. And of course there's the mending, and the sewing, and the
laundry. Why are you standing there? Finish them all now! Caroline exited from the chamber and
desperately do her chores but didn’t complain at all. Meanwhile in the King’s castle, the king
himself started to complain about his son, “Why it’s been over twenty years and
Harold is not yet married. When shall I see him live in his own life with his
dear wife?” the king asked his daughter, the Grand Duchess Irisa. “Oh father, I think it is better that we
should be patient.” The duchess answered. “I am patient. I just wanted to see his
family.” “I understand, sire. But why not…” “What?” “Why not hold a ball for you to calm.” She was right the king thought and command
the royal messenger to deliver the message to the whole town that every
eligible maiden is to attend. Back at the chateau, Caroline sang a verse
while she was cleaning the hall. “Oh sing sweet little lark. For grace is thy mark. Oh please, please sing for me. So I will pray thee. And I will tell your tale wherever I sail. Oh sing sweet little lark. For grace is thy mark.” She stopped cleaning and singing when
Caroline heard someone knocking at the door. She opened and saw the royal
messenger handing her a letter saying, “It’s an urgent message from his
majesty’s, the king.” Caroline thanked him and went upstairs to
tell her step-mother and step-sisters. “Step-mother? Are you in there?” Caroline
called softly as she knocked the door. “Yes, I am here!” the step-mother answered
quite annoyed and angry every time when Caroline was there and here. “It’s a note from the palace.” Caroline
answered while showing the letter. The step-mother took it from her and read it
out loud to the other three women. The step-sisters were in the stage of joy
for there would be a ball tonight for the prince and every unmarried maiden was
to attend. “Then that means I can go to!” Caroline
said also excited, but the step-sisters just mocked her including the elder
one. “Her? Dancing with the prince? I rather
say she will dance with a broom!” But the servant girl said, “Well, why not.
After all I am part of this house and by royal command every unmarried maiden
is need to attend.” “Yes, then so be it. If only you could
finish all your chores.” The step-mother said with a sly face. And then
Caroline excited from the room with thanks. While in her bedroom, Caroline took out
her dress and showed it to her friends, the two blue birds. “Isn’t it lovely? It’s my mother’s dress.”
“Yes and I think you will look very
beautiful in that.” One of the birds answered. “Caroline! Caroline! Caroline!” calls from
above made Caroline stopped picking her jewelry and hurriedly went upstairs to
her step-mother and step-sisters. “Caroline, wash my dress.” “Caroline, get my slippers.” “Caroline, tie my corset now.” The two-stepsisters and their mother began
to make Caroline’s tasks more difficult. They ordered her to brush their hairs,
polish their slippers, tie their belts, and iron their clothes and other things
that seemed like the step-mother and her daughters forgot that Caroline was not
a servant but the true heir of the house. Hours passed and the carriage arrived. Caroline: The carriage is here,
step-mother. Step-mother: Why Caroline, you’re not
ready, child. Caroline: I’m not going. Step-mother: Not going? Why? You didn’t
still finish… Caroline: Yes, good bye. Caroline leaved the room as the evil
step-mother looked at her daughters with a sinister smile. Caroline watched the carriage leave from
her window and began to cry. “Oh why am I crying? What is so good about
this ball? Of course it would be fancy and boring but I think it would be
wonderful.” She wept and wept until three drops of her tear fell, and a beautiful
fairy just then appeared. “Wonderful? How will a ball be so
wonderful without your beauty?” the fairy surprised Caroline. “The ball? Me? Beautiful? Why I’m not.”
The young girl responded. “Of course you are, and I will do anything
for you, my child.” “Who are you?” “Why my sweet girl! I’m your fairy
godmother.” Delighted she was, Caroline asked what her
fairy godmother wanted for her. The fairy then requested her to get some
flowers and two mice, and Caroline did so. They went outside and the fairy godmother
found a watermelon and transformed it into a beautiful carriage using her wand
and verse. “Just a wave of my stick It will do my masterpiece with no trick.” “Oh it’s incredible!” Caroline awed. Next,
the fairy godmother waved again her wand and said a jinx. “Stallions from flowers As one of my powers Coachmen from mice It will be pretty nice.” The two mice and flowers then magically
turned into white horses and gentlemen. The fairy looked at Caroline and said,
“Now as for you, my dear. I will make you the rose of the roses.” One last time, she took and waved her wand
while she said a spell. “Royal blue will do For I know it will be suitable for you Queenly pearls which are radiant white It will shine you like a glorious light.” Caroline’s rag-dress transformed into a beautiful
blue gown and she was wearing a pearl necklace, crown and slippers. “Why, this is a beautiful dress. I’ve
never seen such a beautiful dress like this. Oh look, pearl slippers. Oh this
is a dream that comes true.” Quote she while she danced around. However, her
fairy godmother told her that the spell would disappear by midnight so there
was no time Caroline should loose. At the castle, Prince Harold was jaded of
meeting beautiful young ladies. He bowed at them and again and again as he grew
more tired of standing in front of gentlewomen. But wait, he straighten himself
up when she saw a beautiful lady in blue and pearls, so he made his way through
the crowd and went to Caroline asking her to dance and the latter accepted. The
king and Lady Irisa told the musicians to play music and started the dance. The
prince with Caroline danced the whole night through, whenever someone asked
Caroline to give him her hand for a dance the prince kept refusing and won’t
let the pretty girl away from him. When Caroline saw the clock at eleven
fifty-eight, “I have to go. Please let me go.” Said she. “Why, my beauty?” the prince asked. “Because I have to. Please let me go.
Good-bye!” “I think I need a fresh air for a while.”
Anita told her mother and sister and exited the room. Meanwhile, while running, Caroline dropped
one of her pearl shoes and the prince picked it up. “Wait! You forgot your shoe! Wait! Please
wait!” Prince Harold called but was ignored by Caroline. Caroline swiftly went back to her house
just in time the magic disappeared. Then her fairy godmother reappeared. Fairy godmother: I thought I told you that
the magic will be gone by midnight. Caroline: I'm sorry. I-I guess I forgot about
everything, even the time, but... but it was so wonderful. And he was so
handsome, and when we danced... oh, I'm sure that even the Prince himself
couldn't have been more... more... Oh, well, it-it's over, and... Fairy godmother: And it’s time for you to go to bed. Caroline: Thank you. Thank you so much for everything. And so her fairy godmother watched over her through the
night. Caroline’s step-mother and sisters returned home and found her sleeping
in her rags yet with a smile on her face. By the next morn, “Caroline! Caroline where are you?!” the step-mother
called hastily. “Yes? Here I am.” Caroline was told to bring breakfast for her
step-sisters but it was too early for breakfast, what could the step-mother
possibly made her rush? The two blue birds flew upstairs to know the information
from the step-mother. While drawing the curtains, the step-mother told her
daughters to get up. Step-mother: Diana? Diana. Diana: What? Step-mother: Get up. Quick this instant. We haven't a
moment to lose. Anita? Anita. Get up, Anita. Anita: What for? Why? Step-mother: Oh, everyone's talking about it. The whole
kingdom. Oh, hurry now. They'll be here any minute. Diana: Who will? Step-mother: The Grand Duchess and her brother. They’re
been hunting all night. Diana: Hunting? Step-mother: For that girl. The one who lost her slipper
at the ball last night. They say he's madly in love with her. Anita: Who? Step-mother: The prince. And he and his sister will come
here any minute to find the lady who will fit the slipper. No one’s foot yet
fit the shoe and not even the prince knew that lady. So if there is any chance
for any two of you will fit the slipper then that girl will be the prince’s
bride. Upon hearing this, the birds flew away to tell Caroline
about the news. When Caroline heard the information, she started to clean the
house quickly from the master’s bedroom to the stables for the arriving guests. Time passed and the Grand Duchess with the Prince and
the slipper finally came to Caroline’s chateau. A light shone in the eyes of
women when they saw the pearl slipper. The step-mother first motioned Anita to
fit the slipper, but unfortunately, the thing would be perfectly fit if it
weren’t her hideous heel. They tried to squeeze it in but no success. “This is not the right bride of yours, brother. Let the
other sister try the slipper.” The duchess said. And the step-mother motioned
Diana to see if the shoe does fit her or not. On her first try, the shoe didn’t
fit, and she did it again and again but no avail for her foot was too flat for
the shoe. “This is not my true bride. Is there any maid here in
your house?” the prince asked looking at the step-mother and sisters, and they
knew what he meant was Caroline. Of course, because of their bitter hate for Caroline,
the step-mother and Diana denied the prince. But Anita said, “No, they are
lying. There is one maiden doing her chores somewhere here in this house.” Anita turned at the corner and saw Caroline’s blue birds
sitting by the window frame. “Friends, please tell Caroline to come here for a
minute.” Told she and they obeyed. The birds went to find Caroline and found her cleaning
the chimney. When she faced the guests as well as Prince Harold, her face was
covered by ashes whereas the nobles didn’t mind at all. Caroline took her right
foot and placed it gracefully on the pearl slipper and eventually it fits
perfectly for her. “It is you, you are my bride.” The prince said with a
smile. But there is something… Step-mother: Anita! What is wrong with you?! Why did you
do this?! Anita: Do you want to know why I became so quiet? Do you
want to know why I say “please”? Do you want to know why I called Caroline to
come here? All of those questions are because I am not the real Anita, I am
Cinderella. She transformed into a lady with wings and Caroline
recognized her, it was her fairy godmother. They are confused at once but then
understood when she told the tale. It started many years ago when Cinderella, the fairy
godmother was once a servant of her own house but became a princess when she
married her prince. Cinderella’s own fairy godmother taught her magic as her
apprentice while she reigned. Cinderella died after giving birth to a son and a
daughter, who were actually Prince Harold and Grand Duchess Irisa. When she
died, her fairy godmother told her that she has a mission with a girl named
Anita and transferred all of her powers to Cinderella. As the time goes by,
Cinderella and Anita met each other. Cinderella found Anita as an impolite,
noisy and selfish young lady. She tried to change her personality but no until
Caroline came to the family. Anita hated Caroline once but softened when
Caroline showed her kindness although a slave, and only Cinderella, Anita’s
fairy godmother knew about this. When Anita grew into her early adolescence, an
unknown and incurable disease attacked her and she hid it from her own family
for she was ashamed that she was the only one in the family who was very
sickly. In an evergreen forest, Anita called for her fairy godmother for one
request: leading Caroline to the path of luxury as repayment for her kindness.
She closed her eyes and died, Cinderella buried her beside the tree where she
was sitting and secretly disguised herself as Anita to get near to Caroline and
to fulfill Anita’s (real) wish, she doesn’t even wanted Caroline to go at the
same path that she walked and wanted to test how kind was Caroline. Anita was
actually Cinderella in our story the whole time, she was also became Caroline’s
fairy godmother, and Harold and Irisa’s mother. “Mother, we are happy to see you!” said the prince and
her sister. “I am a thousand times more happier than you both.” Said
Cinderella with a teary eyes and a sweet smile, and she embraced her two babes.
Cinderella gestured the two birds to her palm. “Carolina, your daughter passed the test. Anita, your
will is done.” She whispered and the two birds gave her a peck and to Caroline,
then they flew away to heaven. “Thank you for everything, Fairy godmother.” Caroline
said while she was embracing her. Cinderella looked at the step-mother and Diana, and took
her wand saying a spell, “Your hearts are sour Then may your eyes be blind Empty hearts are empty riches and will never find Blind beggars forever more.” And so, Caroline and Prince Harold were married and they
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Added on August 26, 2013 Last Updated on August 26, 2013 AuthorRidannelyn Gibs Gayares GalloManapla, Negros Occidental, PhilippinesAboutMy name is Ridannelyn Gibs Gayares Gallo or Gibs for short, age 13 born in Bacolod Doctor's Hospital on July 3 2000. I am the daughter of Gibson Gallo, Sr. and Daisy Gallo, and the youngest sibling of.. more..Writing
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