Fallen Angel

Trying to write in between the meds

Why aren't there any stars
Shining in your mental skies
Where is the moon?
Where is the sun?
A new day has begun
Still I don't see
Any galaxies or supernovas
I am coming over
To see why
There are no
Stars shining in your
Mental skies
No glow from your halo
So where could you be?
Why are you hiding from me?
I need to see your face
Cause mistakes can be erased
I don't expect, you to be perfect
Cause we all fall, it is nothing to
Be ashamed of
I need you to know
That you are loved
Please understand that
No one is perfect but
We are all forgiven
It is grace that keep us
Living
See, we are all prone
To making mistakes
In life it is give and take
I need to hear you calling
I know it hurts when you
Are falling
Still no halo to be found
Where did you land when
You hit the ground?
Please make the choice
I need to hear your voice
I need to hear you make
A sound
So you can be found
My angel has fallen
Don't you hear me calling?
I am searching through
All of the debris
I need you to help me
So we both can be free
My angel has fallen
Don't you hear me calling
Please give me proof of life
And I promise I will
Help you make it right
Hush, what is that sound?
I think you have been found
I now see that your
Wings are broken
Keep your heart open
Cause together you and I
Will have you soaring back
To the sky
Cause in time your wounds
Will mend
As I believe you will
One day fly again

Author's Note

Sorry it is so long but it wouldn't stop flowing...

Reviews

[dan]

Rico, I'll say this, WOW. This piece of art you've make. this should be published somewhere, all over. This writing is so real and bare bones, raw in a way. You carry the integrity inherent in a writer/poet and a good man. Way more people should see this, Facebook anyone? Rico, this should be viral somewhere? I don't know any of that stuff or I'd do it myself. take care and get well! get well...dan

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Dan....I am humbled by your words...thank you so much.

[Jennesis]

Beautiful wrote Rico. I agree with Dan. I love the rawness of this. Fly fly fly...wings are meant for spreading. Hope your angel lands safely back with you. Whoever they are.

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Thanks Jenn

[armin]

It has a wonderful hope at the end that makes me like it more and more.
A very nice piece of poetry.
Well done.

armin. ...

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Thanks Armin for your kind review....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

fallen angels can get up again, and can once again fly....
some of the early angels never realized that....and unfortunately we ended up with a dark side of the world because of it.
this poem contains hope.

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Thanks Jacob for the kind review

[Ana D S M]

It's beautiful, you have such imagination and vision.
Good job.