Uppers
Downers
Pills in various
Colors
With side effects
That are far worst
Than the original
Prescription
Oh come taste
The rainbow
But the reality
Is not so sweet
As these skittles
Will make you believe
That leprechauns
Do exist
Yeah, when I was younger I tasted that rainbow myself, too many times to count (or even remember). This is a very crafty way to ruminate on issues that may have been part of your life, looking back as if to say, "Was I right or wrong? This course of action?" Watching how your writing has evolved just since I came on board in January has been a real pleasure to witness. Your writing has gained strength and perspective since I've known you. Keep it up sir! take care...dan
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Dan thank you for your kind words and your keen observations.... Humbled am I.
Yeah, when I was younger I tasted that rainbow myself, too many times to count (or even remember). This is a very crafty way to ruminate on issues that may have been part of your life, looking back as if to say, "Was I right or wrong? This course of action?" Watching how your writing has evolved just since I came on board in January has been a real pleasure to witness. Your writing has gained strength and perspective since I've known you. Keep it up sir! take care...dan
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Dan thank you for your kind words and your keen observations.... Humbled am I.
I have been writing since I was 9. I specialize in freeverse poetry and have cut my teeth on Political and Socially Conscious subject matters. My poetry is not for everyone but anyone who hungers and .. more..