Code Words
A Poem by
Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey
Code Words
StopGo
Yes
No
Maybe
Please
Freeze
Thaw
See
Saw
Bite
Gnaw
Thirst
Hurt
Green
Gold
Let go
Hold
Free
Release
Calm
Beast
Empty
Me
You
Distant
Cold
Bold
Courageous
Infectious
Smile
Dangerous
Lines
Blurry
Blind
You
Don't
I Won't
See
Me
Drowning
In the
Silence
Violence
U inflicted
Self Inflicted
Eye allowed
These
Things
To flow
You know
Suicidal
Rainbows
Yellow
Green
Red
Something
Dead
Trying
Crying
No not me
Empathy
Not that
Everything is
Black
Dumb
Deaf
Death
Nothing
Heard
Not even
Code Words
Stopped
You
From killing
Me softly
© 2015 Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey
Reviews
i love the flow here. Such images with each one, words flow, until it stops.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
"killing me softly with his words" ah a reference to Roberta Flack...
interesting code yet not code...almost like a roshock (spelling?) test---
flows nicely...the words just tumble down until death stops them...
Posted 9 Years Ago
"killing me softly with his words" ah a reference to Roberta Flack...
interesting code yet not code...almost like a roshock (spelling?) test---
flows nicely...the words just tumble down until death stops them...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks Jacob for the review... I appreciate it.
This is genius! Love it, I could see this one being sold my friend. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is genius! Love it, I could see this one being sold my friend. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
This is so cool! I've never seen anything like it! It's absolutely fantastic, Rico! Amazing job!
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is so cool! I've never seen anything like it! It's absolutely fantastic, Rico! Amazing job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much...congrats on your contest win....
9 Years Ago
You're welcome :) and thanks!
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Added on February 18, 2015
Last Updated on February 18, 2015
Author
Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey Politically InCorrect, LA
About
I have been writing since I was 9. I specialize in freeverse poetry and have cut my teeth on Political and Socially Conscious subject matters. My poetry is not for everyone but anyone who hungers and ..
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