She Bleeds in Color

He is dead

Because she saw

RED

But before that

she saw

BLACK

Cause the

WHITE came

through the

BLUE

But somehow

in the day

The clouds

made everything

GRAY

of course she

feels remorse?

as her

GREEN eyes

Go back to

RED

Cause the color

she HOPED for

That existed

in her head

Is now

BLACK

and dead

on the

CRIMSON floor

Her favorite

color no more

Reviews

[Leviathus Fortes]

Very colorful piece.

This seems as if a tragedy could have been avoided but a wanting caused something more to occur.

[Jamestown]

Nice piece of work, colorful and not just the screen, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Jennesis]

love the way this looks on the screen, but the author's note didn't come through. So it sounds like the woman here is angry, seeing red first, then bleeding. Interesting. What were you thinking about when you wrote this?

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

how much I hate Valentine's Day.....so many tragedies around that holiday....