Knocking Again

Hello there I came to
Your house and knocked
At various doors
I tried
Your heart
Your soul but
I felt the chill
Coming from
The basement
I knew that love
Hadn't visited
There in a long time

I decided to visit you
At work
This is where you spend
Most of your days
Reduced to a cubiclized
Space reeking havoc
On your diluted pupils
Of reality as you
Run around like
A lab rat in a maze
I was amazed
That you weren't phased
About my existence
As I was invisible

I sent you an email
That failed
RTS on letters
I sent in the mail
I sent you a text
It is me...OMG (Oh My God)
You were to busy
ROTFLYFA (Rolling on the floor laughing
(Your faith away)
To hear what I
Had to say
I sent you a tweet
#isitGodyouseek
#Godistryingtospeak

I needed you to know
That although
I have tried to
Reach you in different
Ways
I am asking you
Should I leave or stay
Should I wait for you
To pray?
Hoping to hear
You say
One day
Master, please
Try the door
once more
I am so sorry that
I missed
You before
Hopefully it
Will not be too
Late
As I stand on
The outside
Of heaven
Because you
Closed the gate
On me
Eternally

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Fabulous piece of work, bravo! Isaiah 41:10, thanks for sharing!

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Imbued by Revelations Chapter 3 verse 20....thanks for the review and I am going to read the verse in Isaiah...

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Isaiah 41:10New International Version (NIV)

10 So do not fear, for I am with you;
do not be dismayed, for I am your God.
I will strengthen you and help you;
I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Revelation 3:20New International Version (NIV)

20 Here I am! I stand at the door and knock. If anyone hears my voice and opens the door, I will come in and eat with that person, and they with me.

[Jamestown]

All glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus, if you have time tell me what you think about some
read moreAll glory and honor belongs to Christ Jesus, if you have time tell me what you think about some
of my spiritual work, thats usually what I write, PTL God bless you brother!

[Madison Rose]

I love this poem, it rocks Rico! A great read!

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Thanks so much for the review and thank you for helping to remember my father this morning with your name....his name was Howard Madison....thank you

[Madison Rose]

Wow, what a wonderful coincidence :)

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Revelation 3:20New International Version (NIV)

20 Here I am! I stand at the door and knock. If anyone hears my voice and opens the door, I will come in and eat with that person, and they with me.

[Madison Rose]

This gives your poem new meaning, so it is Jesus waiting for her?

[Madison Rose]

This poem rocks! :)

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

He gave her/him every opportunity... The question is whether or not the door closed or not....