Good one! This came to me as one of those moments when internalizing gets you into a discussion after a little shove and pull yuo come to realize that you have arrived at a disagreement. Time continues to pass and suddenly you are giving "full on " explanation to your self. Who is listening?
If indeed I'm anywhere close I find this clever.
Thank you.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the kind words and thoughtful insights Rene...I appreciate it
I enjoyed this piece of writing.
It really made me picture it in my head and with the irony at the end of it, gave it a nice touch to the poem. it is thought provoking, when we are talking to ourlselves about some things, are we really saying things that make sense?
Good piece of writing, thanks for sharing
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks for taking the time out for leaving a detailed review... I appreciate it
Good one! This came to me as one of those moments when internalizing gets you into a discussion after a little shove and pull yuo come to realize that you have arrived at a disagreement. Time continues to pass and suddenly you are giving "full on " explanation to your self. Who is listening?
If indeed I'm anywhere close I find this clever.
Thank you.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks for the kind words and thoughtful insights Rene...I appreciate it
I have been writing since I was 9. I specialize in freeverse poetry and have cut my teeth on Political and Socially Conscious subject matters. My poetry is not for everyone but anyone who hungers and .. more..