Unwanted Boomerang

Freeverse

Smiles are in limited rotation
On the roll call of good deeds
My name was missing
So in the cavern of fools
I am forced to dwell

To my left 

The table of regrets

Is set

There is a vacancy

Set up for me but

My eyes don't move

My feet are numb

To the situation

As I am

Sitting on 

The rock of
Intolerance and

Indignation 
I am

Staring down 
At the valleys
Of indifference and

Condemnation

Hearing the echoes
Of my failures

Pressing against my

Restless discontentment

Just to have

My disappointments

Returned to me
Like an unwanted
Boomerang

Reviews

[Jennesis]

I love the different fonts of:
Indignation
Condemnation
Restless Discontent
My disappointments.

Those lines create the tone and could be a poem in their own write. what sticks out for me is "hearing the echoes of my failures" Isn't that so true for all of us. Wow, we have to live with them and they tend to keep coming back.
~Jennesis

[Ttocs Nesnetsrac]

Dig.
Great tempo.
Potent message.

[Sami Khalil]

"At the valleys
Of indifference and
Condemnation
Hearing the echoes
Of my failures"

We all have those valleys and losses from failures or lost chances. It is part of life and maturing. An excellent write, sir...:)...................

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

thanks for taking the time out to review my work. I am humbled by your praise...thank you thank you!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Leviathus Fortes]

Regret can devour a soul.

And emotion is the appetizer.

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Thanks for the review and wise words....