The Mutual Admiration Society

who would we impress without each other! (Inspired by Poetic Justice)

lit 

with an energetic bloom

of creative flair, doing dare, down-let hair

wit

that cascades down

rapunzels 'round

with no sound

yet not drowned!

spawns

in the sea of black think

as you blink

some primordial link, 

boils your ink

genesis drink

never to parch-

meant to march

prop our flagging ideas

up like starch

on your collar...

but your caller

has more galler

than a holler!

as it echoes, and it let goes, boldly gecko's,

no conceit

ever slithers

never dithers

clever pither!

so eloquent riffer...

while cavorting, so rip-snorting, soul supporting

your endeavors and dreams...

edged in crimson

'long the lining

faintly shining

humbly pining

to be seen, but not heard, as just words

but much deeper...

deftly lurching

keen soul-searching

risk besmirching

in the hot bite, of a fraught night, in the spotlight

dressed

with the tension

subtle coy apprehension

just to mention

your invention

condescension 

isn't part

of your emotional attire

your resilient aspire

or your ebullient fire

I so deeply admire!

carefree

laughter drifting

no praise grifting

you so artfully shifting

those compliments gifting

your esteem so uplifting

your esteem so uplifting!

rikkevi rue copyright 2102

Author's Note

written purely out of flippancy for silly fun! And NO, I didn't consult any thesauruses or rhyming guides ;-P

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the best and most wickedly delightful part of this is that it has "flavor" . . . .a rhythmic palpitation of the fruit of language popping like some mischevious pop rock, bursting with plum and rich mind seeds to root the imagination firmly to the cadence of the new amouze bouche of 21st century poetry~ the entire meal for the mind causes this specific rhythmic girl thing to grin and dare it deeper still . . . . ;)~ ahhh~ the exquisite variations on grammar, syntax and the bold undressing and refurbishing of rhyme . . . . applause!

[Mockingbird]

witty, well constructed and unpredictable. the rhymes are whimsical and could be seen as a spoken word piece. brings to mind someone who has the exceptional ability to impress, who is humble and who is also inspiring for others. excellent job.

[Distant horizons]

Love it. Has more caller than a holler. I'd need drugs to come up with something like this. Great title too. Can't find anything to be critical about. Sorry. This is an excellent read

[EMF]

Spot on.. A superb and accurate write. Aq joy to be thought provoked in such an eloquent way

[.]

I would give this a 10 out of 10!!!!! The flow is sublime, caught in double time, spot on meter, spot on rhyme, I'm drunk on sobriety, at your mutual admiration society!!

*lots of back patting* bravo.. :D