Off The RIP

Off The RIP

A Poem by richy
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just made it up now

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The difference between Imagination and dreams...
No clue. could you tell me.
I wake in the morning with fragments of a dream.
I wander aimless piecing the fragments together,
Imagining It's means.

I close my eyes and rub hardest,
connecting the shimmer dots behind my eye lids.
I find this to annoy the eye but there's something he's not telling me.

I'll try again tomorrow with another approach.
I'll waterboard my eyes and electrocute my mind.
I'll Imagine while I sleep and dream while folding Sheets.

© 2016 richy


Author's Note

richy
Free writing Is a good exercise. Publish It without rereading. Fuck it. It's your mind!

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The first two lines mean the most to me, I sometimes find myself asking the same thing. They both have the ability to be what you want them to be I guess the only difference is to dream you must be sleep.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very bizarre & intriguing & surprising collection of everyday observations. I especially like the reference to the sparkles behind eyelids, well expressed in your words, but I've never seen it mentioned before. I like the originality in this thinking.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on March 4, 2016
Last Updated on March 4, 2016
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Boston, MA



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