Let Love

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There is someone better for you than me.

There is someone better for me than you.

Let our love be not caring,

Reviews

[Diamond Dunbar]

How do you accept it so easily, yes there is someone esle but the love how do you make it not care when you cared for it all? Help me

[richy]

accepting the one you love for who they are or move on that's the only choice i see. read the one i sent you it's an extension of this.

[barleygirl]

I used to always feel this way, when I was younger, & there were many suitors wanting my affections. What I was really doing is pushing everyone away. So I'm guessing that's what this poem is about. A self-satisfying prophesy, just like your comment on your page: "Just another place for nobody to read what I write." I feel sad to read this outlook about love & about your writing. Why are you afraid to let people in?

[richy]

This is actually a reflection on someone who wont let our love be. It's about two people wanting each other to fit a mold. It's about not giving up on the love just because we aren't perfect.

[barleygirl]

I'd like to invite you to say all that in your next poem. This comment of yours is actually much better than the poem. It shows us so much more. And your readers really do want you to show us more.

[richy]

I'm going to write something for you right now.