Rainfall

It's raining, raining, raining my unshed tears,
The Thunder is rumbling, rumbling, rumbling my supressed groans,
...And once in a while lightning flashes, illuminating the darkness, preaching hope.

Reviews

[Maddy Stillman]

I love when an author can get the point across in only a few words or lines. I always feel like I'm scrabbling to portray a clear meaning without excessive language and explanation. I wish I could create such an impact with so little words. I like your use of repetition and word choice. Great work!

[Passengerr]

Wow! Thank you Maddy Stillman.

[Tomoe Tellez]

I've always seen thunderstorms as a miracle and a gift from god. I really like this poem. Great job!

[Passengerr]

Thank you so much Alondra.. Glad you see that way too.

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

A beautiful piece. The meaning is so profound. The first two verses are sad but it ends on a hopeful and optimistic note. This is one of the best pieces I've ever read. Though short, it conveys the entire story wonderfully. Keep up the good work! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Nice write Sam, I love the user of three's in this piece.
There's always hope. Even the darkness shines in the light...

[iobiageli]

With such few words, an awesome piece. :)

[Emily]

Damn, that hit me like a lightning bolt! S few words produced a lot of emotions. Good job!

[ANTO]

3 times as much tribulation as there is glimmers of hope in this piece which pretty much reflects reality - its the 'lucky' person who can break even in terms of good and bad luck and the very rare person who has more good luck in this life.
But 3:1 Isnt a bad ratio.
Thought-stirring piece this one RS.
Thanks for sharing.

[Passengerr]

3:1 is definitely no tragedy.. Thanks for the review Anto, i've been offline for awhile. How's everything going?

[B]

Rain is the answer
to a prayer
Sent to the highest sky
Its gorgeous

[Passengerr]

You're awesome.
thanks for the review

[B]

Thank you :)
But i really am not
but thanks

[Passengerr]

Except u didn't write the review then you're not:-)
you're welcome..

[Passengerr]

Except u didn't write the review then you're not:-)
you're welcome..

[B]

lol
I wrote the review i tell no lies lol

[Passengerr]

Lol, then for that awesome review you're awesome.

[B]

Thanks Richie

[KaoticOrder]

really insightful and meaningful. i love this!

[Passengerr]

Thank you very much.

[Ana B.]

A beautiful philosphical musing......Deep meaning has it.