Tragic love

its a poem about falling in love over and over again with the same person but finally moving on because it was never going to work out. would appreciate your reviews on this one.

Words of mirage,
acts of fallacy,
blue and red,
on same bed.

Zany debacle,
in need of a miracle,
eyes turn white,
heart beats cold.

Moment of peace,
hopeful for bliss,
comes to ephemeron,
leaves with memories to burn.

Sailing emotions on a ocean,
setting feelings ablaze in rendition,
it was all too tragic,
it completely disappeared like magic.

Reviews

[Anahat]

Nicely written :)
Keep writing!

[Passengerr]

thank you.

[micky]

Wow beautiful piece such a sad tale. I love it

[Passengerr]

Thanks Micky, I appreciate that.