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Your skill with verse and a song between the lines has been finely put forever, Richard, especially,
'Every morn as sun arises,
another day I will be blessed.
For, I know there’ll be surprises;
sheer joyfulness each time expressed....
Every morn as sun rises'
Posted 1 Week Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
14 Hours Ago
With most grateful thanks 🥀🐝
Dear Em,
The gracious warmth and intelligen.. read moreWith most grateful thanks 🥀🐝
Dear Em,
The gracious warmth and intelligent beauty of your reviews never fail to gratify an olde bard's most arduously sincere efforts.
Thus, I bow to thee now with humble-hearted happiness!
Thank you, Em, for this ultra-interesting group! ⁓ Richard🖌
14 Hours Ago
Oh my, thank you, Richard, but do get up before you hurt your back!
Hope you enjoy t.. read moreOh my, thank you, Richard, but do get up before you hurt your back!
Hope you enjoy the Group, having to get used to how things are done with it. Should have learned things before hand. It is supposed to be fun and friendly, however!
And with that sun rising, spring on the horizon adds another dimension to our faces in the ability to smile, once we are properly defrostedfrom winter of course!
😃
Posted 5 Days Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Days Ago
Of course, My Friend 🤜🌿🤛
Winter will have had to shed its cold,
that.. read moreOf course, My Friend 🤜🌿🤛
Winter will have had to shed its cold,
that Springtime might approach so bold.
with gentle arms embraced and thrilled,
like none before has yet fulfilled.
Thank you, Lorry, for reading
and commenting! ⁓ Richard🖌
Your skill with verse and a song between the lines has been finely put forever, Richard, especially,
'Every morn as sun arises,
another day I will be blessed.
For, I know there’ll be surprises;
sheer joyfulness each time expressed....
Every morn as sun rises'
Posted 1 Week Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
14 Hours Ago
With most grateful thanks 🥀🐝
Dear Em,
The gracious warmth and intelligen.. read moreWith most grateful thanks 🥀🐝
Dear Em,
The gracious warmth and intelligent beauty of your reviews never fail to gratify an olde bard's most arduously sincere efforts.
Thus, I bow to thee now with humble-hearted happiness!
Thank you, Em, for this ultra-interesting group! ⁓ Richard🖌
14 Hours Ago
Oh my, thank you, Richard, but do get up before you hurt your back!
Hope you enjoy t.. read moreOh my, thank you, Richard, but do get up before you hurt your back!
Hope you enjoy the Group, having to get used to how things are done with it. Should have learned things before hand. It is supposed to be fun and friendly, however!
a stunning poem Richard…. almost like a wedding vow, all over again…. your well chosen words really reflect your deep emotions….
thank you for sharing
warmly, B🌷🌷🌷🌷
Posted 1 Week Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Days Ago
Thank you, Betty, ever-so kindly🍒
Your own deep emotions and words of appreciative.. read moreThank you, Betty, ever-so kindly🍒
Your own deep emotions and words of appreciative thanks shine through to touch an olde bard's heart.
You, too, are most warmly thanked for such a lovely review! ⁓ Richard🖌
A beautifulness poem to write sir, in my humble opinion sir I think a last line with the refrain
"Another day I will be blessed" looks great to (me), it's a wonderful piece, honestly I'm repeating after you silently in my mind.
Posted 1 Week Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Days Ago
Beautifully spake, Dear Tumi 🙏🏼
What could be more heartifully repeated than th.. read moreBeautifully spake, Dear Tumi 🙏🏼
What could be more heartifully repeated than the gift of spirited delight shared through your closing words, My Fine Fellow Poet.
Thank you, Syr, for the most inspiring finishing line! ⁓ Richard🖌️