Her Warm, Glowing Ink…. (tenderly sensual)

"COWRITE w/AMY R" … QUATRAINS with metered and unmetered verses, in an a-b-a-b rhyme scheme.

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   Her Warm, Glowing Ink….

   

              Her pen, it gleamed a fervent glow

              that found his every waking part.

              Like flowers dance as warm winds blow,

              their passions grew right from the start.

             

              With each stroke, she captured his heart,

              through every line their souls intertwined.

              Her ink mirrored her deepest love's art,

              their celestial waltz perfectly aligned.
   

              A poet intrigued, by lure's touch,

              from her spell's succulent caress …

              leaving him powerless as such

              that he wants her, he must confess.
   

              A poetess' magic heat flowed from her hands,

              each syllable stripped him 'pon her burning pyre.

              She cast a golden heart trance 'pon her man's …

              they danced, shimmering like morning sun's fire.

             

              All around them ceased to exist,

              two hearts thrummed as never before.

              As sure as roses crave dawn's mist,

              they both knew they wanted much more.

             

              From evening’s song Nature awakes,

              fireflies sleep in dawn’s early light.

              Yes, in love’s world, his touch makes

              her warm, glowing ink flow … jussst right!

              Cowrite by Amy R & Richard

                        © 5 June 2024

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Author's Note

Aesthetic Digital Artwork: "TWIN SPIRITS" by Stephanie Urbanik, ©2022

I began; we alternated.

Please, offer any sincere critique you feel will better this work.✍🏼

Reviews

[Susan 🦋]

A lovely co-write indeed! Perfectly illustrated with "Twin Spirts", it totally sets the mood. A pleasure to read and review this Amy R and Richard! :-)

A poetess' magic heat flowed from her hands,
each syllable stripped him 'pon her burning pyre.
She cast a golden heart trance 'pon her man's …
they danced, shimmering like morning sun's fire.
WOW!... more in a minute... just letting these words simmer! :-)

[Richard🖌]

M'Dear Lady Susan 🕊

As you well know, cowriting is a rarity for me, accepted upon sincere invitation from only a few. I guess, the mood just hit me to do it with Amy R, and it was fun. She's a pretty darn good writer, wouldn't ya say! : )
She selected the artwork and colors, I followed her thoughts and lead, furnishing edits along the way … I'm so pleased You find favor in this little effort.

I agree, Susan, that verse is the hot-sauce🔥 ⁓ Richard🖌

[Lisasview]

Of course this is wonderful and a real find for me to enjoy on this rather busy Saturday. From the absolutely perfect image and color to the words I was captured by the words...and again I am reading behind the lines with the use of metaphors which I love.
For example these words...which many will just read a words....but not me...
"Yes, in love’s world, his touch makes
her warm, glowing ink flow … jussst right!"
Lisa

[Richard🖌]

Such a lovely review, Lisa Dear 🌈🌤

On this rainy, overcast Texas Saturday morn, you've parted the clouds and let sunshine paint a brightly glowing rainbow.
The times I've cowritten can be counted on two hands, but with Amy's invite, I couldn't resist. The eye-candy artwork and beautifully suggestive title are also her creations, and ensuing impetus for our inspirations into every metaphor, emotional fervor, and rousingly warm inference.
Your "behind the lines" vision, M'Dear, is 20/20. ; )

Thank you ever-so warmly for gracing my always grateful pages!
Happy smiles 'n hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Lisasview]

You and Amy are most welcome!!
Lisa

[Tumi]

from the first stanza i see a man impressed and touched by the words of a poetess which leads to deep feelings between both pair
the second stanza first line was beautiful
With each stroke, she captured his heart, creating romance and feeling of love
the man already in love with the poetess cares and words
find a way to profess
and their feelings were mutual with brought to poem to its climax
the words were finely expressed
and i enjoyed every bit of it

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Tumi🍷

Ever-so gratefully for your special attention to some of the highlights in this rather warmly romantic little cowrite with our dear, fine poetess, Amy R … I know she will joyfully appreciate them, as do I.

It's nice to be so fully understood, appreciated, and enjoyed.
Thank you, Syr, for your graciously sincere words! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Marie]

A very finely executed collaboration in this admirable poem. Lovers in their own world, the magic of love is displayed through excellent word choice in this very sensual write. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing, Richard...

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Marie,

You are very welcome, too.
Thank you for your nice compliments and appreciative words. ⁓ Richard🖌

[Marie]

Most welcome, Richard...