Grace of Atonement (humility)

Free Verse … a simple poem for those who've been requesting something new.

Author's Note

ARTWORK
"Human Connection" by Maria Rivans, contemporary British artist.

Please, feel free to offer well-meant constructive critique. ✍🏼

Reviews

[lightsong]

I don't know where my review to this gone? it seems I deleted it ? anyway. You've descried yourself well and true here, because You already are all of these and more. simple but like always well written and deliver the lesson smoothly with no force. I like your chosen photo, the Man and the Woman, i.e all humans should behave as your lines say. Thank You Syr for sharing your wisdom through your creative art.

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Dear Ghounwah 🥀

As I arrived to comment on your pervious review, I, too, wondered why/where it had disappeared?
But, how wonderful it truly is to find your humbling words of praise, kindness, agreed upon understanding, and encouragement.
I had thought you might like the photo when I selected it for this piece.
You always grasp the core essence of my work; this is one reason (of many) why I so deeply appreciate your time spent reading and reviewing me.

With most grateful hugs 'n blessings, I most warmly thank you, Dear Ghounwah! ⁓ Richard🖌

[lightsong]

I, as we all should be thankful and grateful for all your time and hard work, giving and richening poetry and the cafe here.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am down with this philosophy....
We are often too arrogant to do any of these things...but we need to get that ego knocked off its block so that we may.
j.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Jacob 🙏

Seems we see eye-to-eye! ⁓ Richard 🍂

[Relic]

Do you have a verse for those we tried to help on WC and were cursed out for it? lol

I agree, we should all aspire to follow your advice in this well crafted poem. :)

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Tim 🙏

Seems we see eye-to-eye! ⁓ Richard 🍂

[Temperance]

Oh, if we all applied this to our lives the world would be in a better place. This poem should be repeated many times to the world. Gives one pause, as it should, to ponder where they fit into these verses. I like this, Richard. Thank you, Temp

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Temp 🙏

Seems we see eye-to-eye! ⁓ Richard 🍂