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Senryu

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Author's Note

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Reviews

[Marie]

Wow! What an amazing picture you paint for your reader of snowflakes falling on a cold winter's day, Richard. Gorgeous imagery! Love the alliteration and simile and how you describe the snowflakes drifting into your heart where they were sure to melt in its warmth. Lovely work, Richard. Thank you so very much for sharing...

[Richard🖌]

Dear Marie ❄️

'tis so very true
such a joy sharing with You
what I love to do

Thank you, Sweet Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🌨

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear poet...

[heavenscentgirl1]

A NICELY WRITTEN SEYNRU RICHARD, BUT AS TEXAS TEXANS YOU KNOW THAT WE HAVE’NT HAD MANY OPPORTUNITIES TO ACTUALLY SEE SNOWFLAKES LARGE ENOUGH OR CLOSE TO ACTUALLY APPRECIATE THE BEAUTY OF THEM… SO THEY ARE NOT VERY SPECIAL TO ME AT ALL. BUT YOU KNOW BEING A TEXAS GIRL i AM A TUBE TOP/SHORTS KINDA GIRL. LOL! Mj

[Richard🖌]

Well, Mary Jo,
The years I lived in St. Louis and Milwaukee, I had the opportunity to see many falling snowflakes; some drifting down in the soft, still silence, the size of a quarter … every one uniquely different. You could catch them on your mittens and watch them until they melted … some took as long as 15 seconds. Beeeautiful, indeed!
But, nothing quite equals a long-legged Texas Gal in tank top and tight shorts.😋

Thanks for such a delightful review! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[heavenscentgirl1]

Blushing SMILE. 😊👍😇🤗

[Betty Hermelee]

Beautiful Senyru Richard, about the cold of nature....and the warmth of your heart.
Best.
B.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Betty Dear ❄️

You're a lovely snowflake in your own sweet way.

Warmest winter hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Cherrie Palmer]

When you think of the unique beauty of each crystal, we can see the power it holds.

[Cherrie Palmer]

PS happy new year 🎉 my good friend.

[Richard🖌]

Beautifully spake, Dear Cherrie ❄️

With the heart and soft as a snowflake voice of a true poetess.

Welcome to 2022 … happy smiles 'n hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[lightsong]

You already know right? anything with "snowflake" will drift into my heart to steal it away... I remember this one. "lace crystal wings" ok true, so true... little Angels they are, or maybe they are the tears of Angels...

[Richard🖌]

Well, Miss Gh❅unwah Dear 🌨️

Whatever snowflakes are to You* … I know when they're in your mind and heart, they're bound to be beautiful.

Snowflakes over stars; yes I know … hugs! ⁓ Richard ❄️

[Lisasview]

Oh gosh Richard, I read this a couple of days ago and thought I had left a review...
I really like it..
Short but sweet..lace crystal wings..such a lovely image..

[Richard🖌]

Welcome to 2022, Dear Lisa🥂

It's so nice to hear your lovely voice on the first day of the year, cheering for our innocently gentle little snowflake friends.

Here's hoping your New Year's Eve was filled with great joy and midnight kisses galore! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Susan 🦋]

They have a way of doing that don’t they? Such a pretty Senryu! Laced snowflakes! Soft little falling whispers melting into the heart.❤️

[Richard🖌]

Snowflakes are our innocent little friends.❄️

Thank you, Susan, and Welcome to 2022 ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This reminds me of when I was a little boy and I saw snow falling for the first time. It's a feeling I'll never forget. A wonderful poem Richard.

[Richard🖌]

Snowflakes are our innocent little friends❄️

Thank you, Carlos, and Welcome To 2022 ⁓ Richard 🍃