the Stroll....

Senryu ⛩️ ⁓ soul peace.

Author's Note

Artwork courtesy of copyright free Wikimedia.

Please, feel free to offer helpful criticism. ⛩

Reviews

[Relic]

This is certainly the hope of many who share their hearts with another. To feel the warmth of their hand, and the softness of their kiss is well...bliss.

You're the exemplary example of a poet, Richard. I'm proud to know you and your writing.
Excellent poem.

[Richard🖌]

G'morning, Syr Tim🌤

What a sparkling review you've gifted this wee Senryu of hopeful joining between two affectionate lovers on a stroll.
I very much enjoyed your own promising take on it, too.

Thank you ever-so warmly, My Friend, for your continuing camaraderie, encouragement, and gracious praise! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[LJW]

"stolling" ?
.......................

[Richard🖌]

Hey, Lovely Lady🍂

Long time no see, and wouldn't you just know I'd screw-up the first poem of mine you read on your return … some welcome back!🙄
Sheesh! Purely inattentive, I assure you, but all fixed and awaiting the notion of your, hopefully, gracious review.😏

Thanks for the shoulder tap; someone needed to wake me up … LOL! ⁓ Richard🍃

[LJW]

I thought it might be strolling but I was not exactly sure. Lol

You remember me? I did accept your friend request. Old age...gotta love it.

[Richard🖌]

Yes, M'Lady, I recall your stirring writes very well from my bad boy "no reviews" days … I've since learned to comment on reviews and reciprocate in-kind.

So, I'll be by drop[ing by to see ya.
Old age? As long as you're a woman, I love any age.😉

[LJW]

Ooh.
I've never been flirted with by a dragon before.

[Richard🖌]

Watch out!
His tongue's fiery flames🔥will lick you 'n flick you … LOL!

[lightsong]

The image alone is enough to steal my heart! the perfect clever sentimental title, it’s never easy to write emotive and strong poetry with few lines but You always do, well not surprising for our Master Bard :>

[Richard🖌]

Delovely, Ghounwah🌸

Don't you agree that the Haiku and Senryu are great forms to express most anything … though, I'll admit they require a bit more imagination to do it well.

Thank you for your nice compliments … ever-so graciously! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[lightsong]

I totally agree! and I think a mans' mind is more flexible to write with them than a womans' talkative one lol Delovely well that's lovely new word to learn :>

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

This was a very nicely imaginative piece. The words really capture the artwork as well. A solid senryu.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Carlos, ever-so gratefully🍁

How could a bard wish for a more positive and encouraging review to one of his humble sharings … this, I cannot answer.

May the same joy you've gifted me reflect into the gracious brightness of your heart! ⁓ Richard🍃