the Stroll....

Senryu ⛩️ ⁓ soul peace.

Author's Note

Artwork courtesy of copyright free Wikimedia.

Please, feel free to offer helpful criticism. ⛩

Reviews

[Relic]

This is certainly the hope of many who share their hearts with another. To feel the warmth of their hand, and the softness of their kiss is well...bliss.

You're the exemplary example of a poet, Richard. I'm proud to know you and your writing.
Excellent poem.

[Richard🖌]

G'morning, Syr Tim🌤

What a sparkling review you've gifted this wee Senryu of hopeful joining between two affectionate lovers on a stroll.
I very much enjoyed your own promising take on it, too.

Thank you ever-so warmly, My Friend, for your continuing camaraderie, encouragement, and gracious praise! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[lessa (kenzie)]

Oh i don't know, sometimes you can be someone and still feel lonely,
This is lovely though, I love the sentiment and the feelings.
Awesome

[Richard🖌]

Bless you, Lessa,

Your sweet kindness, shared thoughts, and kindred praise.
read moreBless you, Lessa,

Your sweet kindness, shared thoughts, and kindred praise.

Hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Kim S.]

it is nice to have someone to stroll with, loneliness stinks so bad...

[Richard🖌]

Yes it is, Beckie, and yes it does stink! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

So very truthful, ever so beautiful write here, found it peaceful
to be guided by love

[Richard🖌]

Your lips, Kesch, speak sweet truth 🥀

Love, the peaceful ('oft passionate) inner guide.

Thank you for your delightful compliment! ⁓ Richard🖌

[poetgurl]

This is a very lovely piece, love the layout of this piece

[Richard🖌]

Thank you so much for your nice compliments.⁓ Richard 🍃

[Lisasview]

Here another one I had read but did not review..I think this was because I was not sure how to review..
I love the picture that goes along with the words..
and, once again your words fly off the page and into my heart..

[Richard🖌]

A heart, such as yours, Lisa

Feeling the warming essence of where lovers' strolls lead, increasingly draws nearer each step's wondrously enthralling destination.

Your beautiful words in review, perfectly reflect their source.
Thank you, Dear Lisa, ever-so warmly ⁓ Richard🖌

[Betty Hermelee]

a romantic beautiful Senryu you have created here, two souls twined into one, sharing their joy!
Best, B

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Betty 🍂

May all your strolls be beside the one you love … even if it's for the moment. ; )

Happy New Year Hugs ⁓ Richard🖌

[Betty Hermelee]

Happy New Year to you too🍷🍷🍷🍷

[Susan 🦋]

Beautiful Senryu, perfect image, warm feelings and just so perfectly wriiten. Warms the soul.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Susan🌼

How thrilled I am you've gathered so much in warmth and beauty from this humble little Senryu.

I very much appreciate the lovely compliments, too! ⁓ Richard🍃

[Cherrie Palmer]

The colors blend and harmonize together. You can almost imagine the figures slowly walking away.

[Richard🖌]

Why, thank you most gratefully, Cherrie🍒

I'm so very happy you felt the colours' textures, and the way your imagination caught the ambiance made it all seem so real.

Hugs 'n warmest smiles! ⁓ Richard🍃

[Cherrie Palmer]

You may have to create another one of these. So lovely.