Just Can’t Quit! (lil' bit'a innocent naughty fun)

Rhyming Quatrains in loose meter, with an abab, cdcd, etc; rhyme scheme, 8-count lines, and a 10-count envoi (last line).😋

Just Can’t Quit!

I’ve something yummy in my hand,

it’s long and round and very firm.

For hours of joy it will withstand,

while making famished ladies squirm.

They love to hold it tight and lick …

with savoir faire, start on the end.

Wrapping their tongues ’round slow, then quick;

long, languid laps, a skillful flick.

Mmming with moans, their ecstasy,

there’s nothing like the way it feels.

Something about it sets them free,

exceeding words how it appeals.

Hot ’n tempting, they just can’t quit,

with rounded lips slide up and down.

And, as they suck this perfect fit,

on cinnamon candy stick … goin’ ta town!

; p

Rascal

©2008

savoir faire: French for finesse;

literally, know how to do.

Author's Note

Dusted-off and posted, from when I was Rascal … some might recall me back then. 😏

Well-meant constructive critique is always welcome. : )

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Yeah, I've whipped a few weenies into submission in my day, so who am I to protest your sleazy sleight of hand? It's good to see you break free from your usual overly-laced girdle of poetic perfection *wink! wink!* In fact, now that I'm getting a head of steam going here, I might as well admit it . . . your poem blatantly paints you as the poster child for those kinda men who point to his own groin with both index fingers, leering at a lady, as if to signal -- get with it, dame! That's the kind of old-fashioned cad I have you pegged for & you just try to deny it, honey bunches of randy oats (((HUGS)))

[Richard🖌]

HA-HAHHH!!!
Margie, you're a wild gas.🤪

No one else I know of could have given this naughty little piece the ribald review you have. And, no one but you could have made me spew my mouthful of hot tea all over my t-shirt.
You've pegged me perfectly, and your description of me pointing my fingers is to die for … and, in front of that smitten, awe-inspired "dame", no doubt … WINK*

Thanx, Dearest, for a laugh I'm sure will reoccur every time I think of this top fun review … big HUGS! ⁓ Rascal 🍃

[lightsong]

hhhahhahah that was NOT just a (lil' bit a naughty fun) lol Mr. Richard and his playful naughtiness Mr. Rascal! good for his spirit, to stay fresh, creative and "naughty" for sure ;)

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, m'lovely Miss Ghounwah🌼

You know Mr. Rascal inside me so well.😏
What I'm liable to write next
one just never can tell …
cheeky, but not too complexed
when under my naughty pen's spell,
or that special lady's delightful effects.

You're so fun, 'n a lil' bit naughty, yourself.🙄
Thanx for joining-in on the fun! ⁓ Rascal 🍃

[heavenscentgirl1]

OH MY, YOU NAUGHTY LITTLE RASCAL YOU!!! 😝😜 HSG 😇

[Richard🖌]

OOPS!
You caught me, Mary Jo! 😋

Watching you enjoy that sweet stick,
each nibble 'n lick …
ohhh, what a joy
for every girl and boy!

Thank you, Dear One,
for sharing in the fun! ⁓ Rascal 🍃

[heavenscentgirl1]

YOU ARE WELCOME FOR THEM BOTH, THE POEM AND …… 😛

[Susan 🦋]

What's wrong with cinnamon sticks?? ;-) They're yummy...and so is peppermint, green apple, watermelon etc That's what we are talking about right? lol Now what's so naughty about that! Let the girls have some fun! HA! Well Richard, Rascal huh?... seems to suit this little write! That image is a real smile maker... perfect!

[Richard🖌]

(hm? The site cut have my response off … tryin' again)

What a fun review, Susan😋

You sure seem to be quite an expert on what we're talking about; I mean, with all the yummy flavors … wink*

Glad you got such a lick … er, kick outta this-un.
Thanks for the chuckle, Sweetie! ⁓ Rascal 😏