This poem is so lovely it plays like a melody.
So tender and silky, it speaks to me.
How many hearts have you stolen or left throats swollen?
My dear man you are a rare gift with song,
Please don't keep me not waiting long
For another chance to hear your voice
Please understand I have no choice.
I'd love to dance to your tune
In the hour of midnights first June.
(Ok hardly is it advice to give or comment made. But I had to answer in this way, for to read your words is to dance in celebration to a man who celebrates women. Thank you for sharing
Posted 4 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
With a broad "Thank you" heart smile, Dear Audrey 🌸
Sighhh! Such a compellingly st.. read moreWith a broad "Thank you" heart smile, Dear Audrey 🌸
Sighhh! Such a compellingly stirring review you've gifted this doting poem and its graciously pleased author.
You certainly know how to catch a bard's attention, charming him with a delightfully sweet, warmly imaginative verse of your own.
Seems you celebrate men every bit as enjoyably as I do women.
For answering in the way you have, please, accept my warmest hug of thanks to thee, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃
'Ultimate Poetess'
Richard,
This is a poem which by it's inclusive style woos the lady writer to have confidence. Affirmation is so important! I got a kick out of the descriptive character housed within. Everyone different in appearance but still with a voice all her own. Good job!
Kathy
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Hi, Kathy Dear 🐝
I was wondering when your lovely self would come across this homa.. read moreHi, Kathy Dear 🐝
I was wondering when your lovely self would come across this homage to You and your effulgently unique poetic skills.
How enthralling to know You're wooed by anything from Me … still, I've never once noted a lack of confidence in anything You.
In fact, it's You who's inspired Me.
How giddy I am you got a kick out of this, and for your thoughtfully sweet compliment, too.
A big warm HUG to You, with a Joyously Happy Autumn Smile! ⁓ Richard 🍂
Hi Richard,
On my first visit to read your poems this is the most beautiful one I have ever seen in presentation and writing to honor and pay tribute to all women poets. To me this is ultimate poetry for each Ultimate Poetess. The painting is stunning too and the title is perfect -- it is unimaginable that these smooth rhythmic lines and rhymes could be bettered.
If it is right to say I have fallen in love with a poem I do not know, but I have fallen for this one.
Richard, would this poem be considered a classic form you mentioned in your review of my poem The POET?
The designs add the perfect flair that helps bring everything to life -- I can not say enough of this poem's beauty and elegance. Surely the ladies love it too.
Thank you Richard for letting us all share your master artistry -- with highest respect,
Roth
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Gosh, Roth! 😳
Form your exuberance I might have to get my hats resized to match a .. read moreGosh, Roth! 😳
Form your exuberance I might have to get my hats resized to match a swollen head … LOL!
Truly, your expressed appreciation and praise are the apex of what this bard composes and shares his earnest labors in hopes of receiving … I am quite honored and humbled by the sincerity of your gracious praise.
In answer, this poem is not composed in a classical form, per se, but the iambic meter (which accounts for each line's smoothness) is common in classical poetry.
Thank you, Roth, for gifting this fine piece to our most lovely poetesses such a stellar review … I know they will appreciate it as much as I do! ⁓ Richard🖌
‘When she blends her heart and soul into her ink.’ This whole poem captures your heart and mind and you lose yourself in the words. Truly a classic kind of poem full on intense passion and words. It almost is like a song. It’s amazing, superb crafted work. Thank you so much for sharing.
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Hey, V-Cat!
You are sincerely and gratefully welcome.
It is a distinct pleasur.. read moreHey, V-Cat!
You are sincerely and gratefully welcome.
It is a distinct pleasure to share my humble poetic efforts with you, and to receive such highly encouraging, gracious, praise and expressions of appreciation, thereof.
Yours, the review a bard writes in hopes of receiving.
Thank you most sincerely! ⁓ Richard🖌
To receive such plaudits and high praise of my humble.. read moreGreetings, Dear Lady Pryde 🌾
To receive such plaudits and high praise of my humble efforts from a poetess of your distinction, by far exceeds what a grateful bard could have expected, but I'm keeping every gracious 'n lovely word. : )
Of course, I guess you know this poem was compose with You in mind.
With happy smiles 'n warmest hugs … thank you, Pryde ⁓ Richard🖌
2 Years Ago
But my mane is strawberry blonde:)
So many amazing poetesses in these parts but thank.. read moreBut my mane is strawberry blonde:)
So many amazing poetesses in these parts but thank you all the same:)
As I’ve read and become familiar with the work of several of the poetesses on this site, I’ve felt — but failed to put into words — exactly the sentiments you so eloquently express in this poem. Thank you!
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Ahhh, Sir Richard,
It's as though you'd written it yourself … such an honor it is I.. read moreAhhh, Sir Richard,
It's as though you'd written it yourself … such an honor it is I could speak in your stead.
Much obliged to you, as-well, for your gracious thanks! ⁓ Richard🖌
I started at the visual for quite awhile, how perfect for this poem, and then I just read this soooo slow, I wanted to luxuriate in every syllable, with not a one of them out of place, not a single word superfluous, everything just so, and just so amazing. I feel enriched!
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Salutations, LJ 🌾
It is a distinct honor to host your first, and very gracious, vi.. read moreSalutations, LJ 🌾
It is a distinct honor to host your first, and very gracious, visit upon my humble pages.
To receive such appreciative accolades for this particular poetic homage is gratification beyond any I could have expected, but I'm keeping every generously spieled word of it … on behalf of our faire poetesses, of course. 😏
Your feeling of enrichment seems to have overflowed into mine.
Thank you, Syr, for staring, reading, and expounding so fully and sincerely.
Blest be, Dear Poet! ⁓ Richard🖌
A lovely ode to lady poets!
And as we write of lovely things
to our heart someday will bring
a love of our own to have and hold
to savor and love till we grow old
Ahhh, e'er so gently your words
laid.. read moreIndeed, you did, Lady-Poet Temperance ✍
Ahhh, e'er so gently your words
laid upon an appreciative ear,
create such a warm message bold
to be held … a promise so dear.
Each soft stroke from your golden pen,
a breath of life sent from deep within …
add a smile from upon your lovely lips;
into charmed trance, a bard's heart slips.
Your own words are the epitome of inspiration a Poetess' enthralling spell can cast.
Hereupon, I rest my case!
With most gracious thanks, Temperance ⁓ Richard🖌
2 Years Ago
You have me swooning with your lovely crafted words. Whisper your prose in my ear and I will follow .. read moreYou have me swooning with your lovely crafted words. Whisper your prose in my ear and I will follow you anywhere... :)