This poem is so lovely it plays like a melody.
So tender and silky, it speaks to me.
How many hearts have you stolen or left throats swollen?
My dear man you are a rare gift with song,
Please don't keep me not waiting long
For another chance to hear your voice
Please understand I have no choice.
I'd love to dance to your tune
In the hour of midnights first June.
(Ok hardly is it advice to give or comment made. But I had to answer in this way, for to read your words is to dance in celebration to a man who celebrates women. Thank you for sharing
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
With a broad "Thank you" heart smile, Dear Audrey 🌸
Sighhh! Such a compellingly st.. read moreWith a broad "Thank you" heart smile, Dear Audrey 🌸
Sighhh! Such a compellingly stirring review you've gifted this doting poem and its graciously pleased author.
You certainly know how to catch a bard's attention, charming him with a delightfully sweet, warmly imaginative verse of your own.
Seems you celebrate men every bit as enjoyably as I do women.
For answering in the way you have, please, accept my warmest hug of thanks to thee, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃
:) fine tribute to women sir! and so romantic if i were a woman i would fall in love with you :))))))))))))))) and the pinch of humor in closing is simply the perfect touch .. well done .. this one will have the maidens swooning :)
E.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
M'Dear Friend, Gene ✊
I could not be happier with your approval and brightly sent b.. read moreM'Dear Friend, Gene ✊
I could not be happier with your approval and brightly sent bevy of accolades, had I won the Nobel Prize for Poetry.
Sincerely, I hope the incomparably amazing Writers' Café poetesses, at least, share your sentiments in measure … and, though, I will admit I am quite smitten with the idea of You falling in-love with Me, the thought (even as a woman) disturbs my sleep … LOL!
Thank you, truly, for your read and great compliments, M'Fine Friend! ⁓ Richard 🍃
ahahahaha! even as a woman eh!? :)))))))))) well .. i am not the pick of the crop no doubt about it .. read moreahahahaha! even as a woman eh!? :)))))))))) well .. i am not the pick of the crop no doubt about it :))))))))))))))))))))))) Happy Valentine's Day coming up dahlink :))))))))))))))))))))))
4 Years Ago
ps. what an incredible compliment that pic is .. stunning ... emotive and sexy ;)
4 Years Ago
Thank you, My Fine Friend,
I must wholly agree with your sentiments.
Luck was on my si.. read moreThank you, My Fine Friend,
I must wholly agree with your sentiments.
Luck was on my side when it came into view … I thought it befit the poem's ambiance and design harmoniously.
So so very much enjoyable and absolutely amazing the way that joyfully the words dance in the reader's mind. I could hardly wait for the next word!!! The lady's and poetesses are most certainly to really love this sparkling, colourful, and vibrant poem. I love the title!!!! And though the entire poem is wonderful, my favourites were the first and third parts and also great finish!!! Superb Richard!!!!!
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Ohhh-MY, Sweet Sil 🎶
Your voice sings as a glorious choral symphony of angels sent.. read moreOhhh-MY, Sweet Sil 🎶
Your voice sings as a glorious choral symphony of angels sent down to bless my humble efforts to adequately pay gracious homage to Ye, my fairest poetic kin.
It is such a harmoniously ironic fact you've highlighted the exact verses that most certainly inspired my heart and soul … go figure! 💕
Bless You, dear poetess, for your inspiringly warm touch of graciousness … happy hugs to thee for finding such enthralling favor in my humble words! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Oh you've opened the flood gates with this one, Richard!!!!
What a wonderfully considered and beautifully created happiness here. It's true, of course, ladies can have the upper hand when it comes to their choice of words, language.. but then again, you and your bless like can create tsunamis of your own but definitely not as lethal! How on earth you can express such genuinely considered phrases within such incredible meter is beyond my brain ( you know it's only pea size, anyway! )
What wonderful thoughts here laid: ' The shape she takes, it may be lithe or slightly slim … might be, she’s strong or stout; perhaps, just prim.' - - - ' If Free Verse, Sonnet, Villanelle, or lovely Prose, - it matters not what kind of poem she bestows; - for, when she blends her heart and soul into her ink, -
it's hers you'll be ~ when she signs with a knowing wink* '
Wonderfully happy, sharing, and of course, absolutely TRUE! :)
What a wonderfully wonderful illustration, Richard!
To receive such eloquently voiced words of beauty, candor, warmly.. read moreThank you, Dear Em,
To receive such eloquently voiced words of beauty, candor, warmly expressed appreciation, and praise, serve as certain proof this piece in homage to the Ultimate Poetess was directed succinctly t'ward Thee.
Your blessings' touch is sheer bliss, Lady Em … ever-so warmly gratefully yours! ⁓ Richard 🍃
4 Years Ago
Can only say Thank You. Richard. Haven't been called a lady for ages. :)
I hope you enjoyed Your poem … and, how right you are, Dear Poet.. read moreHi, Dear Betty : )
I hope you enjoyed Your poem … and, how right you are, Dear Poetess … I'm always smitten by the Lady Poets!
Hey, thanks for the "Beautifully written" and Lovely" compliments … a great way to begin the new year!
Warmest thanks, Lady Betty …
with New Year's Hugs "n Blessings! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Wonderful Richard just wonderful flawless flow and not a smidge of a sense of stricture in this most lofty structure frame you placed upon this write! This may be one of your very best poems and I don't say that lightly:) You know I love so very much when the lines intent melds so beautifully with the rhyme scheme that it feels like the word was designed for the piece and not vice versa you captured this perfectly simply blown away by this one I have read hundreds of your poems and this one stands out swimmingly. Its is a comfort to know that you and your style of write can still flourish in these times when structure and rhyme are not the vogue and dare I say sometimes frowned upon in popular poetry. I will never have your gift of structure (only a glimpse of it on occasion) My fractured bunny mind gets lost with too much structure but it is a lovely thing to read good sir!!!! Merry Christmas dear Richard
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Happy Christmas, Dear Robert🎄
What wonderfully gratifying accolades of praise, enj.. read moreHappy Christmas, Dear Robert🎄
What wonderfully gratifying accolades of praise, enjoyment, and appreciation you've so exuberantly blessed upon this most graciously rendered poem of admiration, awe, and respectful regard unto our wondrously treasured, invaluable Lady-Poets.
To think … without them, poetry would have no heart and soul, no breath, pulse, vibrancy, or reason for even existing … must-less, life itself.
With that pattern to follow, it's no small wonder you think so highly of this piece, eh, My Brother Penman?
That we (You and I) stand together on the precipice of another glorious year shared with our amazingly gifted, adored, accomplished, and beloved feminine counterparts is a promise of joyful adventure and enthrallment I'd not wish for either of us to miss. 😊
Thank You, my fine friend, for reading and enjoying this beautiful piece to our incomparably amazing Poetesses … SALUTE! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Seriously, this is a really well written poem and puts praise precisely where it should be. Too often we hide ourselves and our true feelings away, not so though, the many female poets who bless the cafe with their insight and wisdom.
Seasons greetings to you and yours Richard. T
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Ahhh, T!
That's another poem, altogether. : )
Thank you immensely for your pra.. read moreAhhh, T!
That's another poem, altogether. : )
Thank you immensely for your praise and like-mindedness with my discernments of our faire poetical genre. And, how true your words, that we learn from them when it comes to deeper affairs of the mind, heart, and soul.
Happy Holidays to you, as-well, Sir Poet! ⁓ Richard 🍃
O h my Sir Richard whst a charming tribute you have penned for all the ladies sharing their art ..such loviness in each chosen description.. very nice indeed.
Christmas Cheers
dear friend
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Sweetness becomes thee, Dear Fran Marie🌻
Such a pleasurable privilege it is to rea.. read moreSweetness becomes thee, Dear Fran Marie🌻
Such a pleasurable privilege it is to read and review your wonderfully composed original writings … so beautifully and unselfishly shared for our wonderment.
Your praise and expressed delight so sweetly ingratiate my thankful poem to the site's true heartbeats … warmest hugs of grateful thanks to You, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard🍃
"HAPPY CHRISTMAS TO THEE, M'DEAR FRAN MARIE!"
4 Years Ago
Awhh..you' re so
welcome.dear Richard
best wishes for the coming new year.!
What a kind, earnest offering. Of course, I see your skill with meter and admire it. You clearly have a grasp of this style that surpasses my own understanding, and I admire that skill you've developed. It takes discipline.
I enjoy the way this is presented. It's quite creative and puts me in mind of a pouch of jewels poured out to be regarded. Sparkling with kind words. Excellent work on this, Richard.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Hi, Eilis! 🍂
How wonderfully beautiful your voice flows through my senses, touchin.. read moreHi, Eilis! 🍂
How wonderfully beautiful your voice flows through my senses, touching with skill those places that let me know we've connected in a meaningfully appealing way through this homage those I most assuredly admire and respect so highly.
Your bright praise and recognition of his skills make an olde bard's efforts feel so worthwhile … how happy I feel.
Your words are as stars pulled down from the heavens to bless my page … with warmest, most grateful thanks, Dear Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard 🍃