Love’s Ambling Seasons ⁓ (poignance)

Love’s Ambling Seasons ⁓ (poignance)

A Poem by Richard🖌
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Ballad, in 8/6/8/6 meter, abab rhyme.

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                       Love’s Ambling Seasons ~

               ~-🍁🍃🍁🍂🍁🌿🍁-~**~-🍁🍃🍁🍂🍁🌿🍁🍃🍁🍂🍁🌿🍁🍃🍁🌿🍁🍃🍁-~


                        Through Autumn's glory, life we strolled,

                        soft wind-chimes knew our song ...

                        sweet poems, writ 'pon leaves of gold;

                       'twas naught e'er could go wrong.


                        Each falling leaf a melody

                        that played upon two hearts ...

                        each glazing frost wrought destiny,

                        as love slowly departs.


                        When frozen limbs of Winter crack,

                        these arms ache empty, too;

                        I close sad eyes ... then, all drifts back

                        to days when dreams were true.

 

                        We sensed the paling of desire,

                        a waning of each thrill ...

                        with barely kindled sparks of fire

                        to weather Winter's chill.


                        Sweet Spring swept-in on verdant wing,

                        brought laughter in the rain ...

                        then, Summer's bliss began to sing

                        to Fall's poignant refrain.

 

                        Time was, when Summer held two hearts

                        within their youthful sway ...

                        each mem'ry dances, then departs;

                        too swiftly drifts away.


                        Tho' our love's seasons ambled by,

                        to passion's thrums un-stilled …

                        in moments, two hearts soared on high;

                        yet, ne'er alas ~ fulfilled.


                ~-🍁🍃🍁🍂🍁🌿🍁-~**~-🍁🍃🍁🍂🍁🌿🍁🍃🍁🍂🍁🌿🍁🍃🍁🌿🍁🍃🍁-~

                                                            Sadness Is ~

                                             Richard W. Jenkins

                                                                     ©2019




       
       
       
       

© 2020 Richard🖌


Author's Note

Richard🖌
Artwork compliments of Wikimedia Commons.

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Featured Review

awwwwwwwwwww well done ..lifts me up and takes me down ..a gentle but ..a roller coaster of loave and romance .. strung through the lines of seasons .. well done again i say! you have professionally put the whole picture together ..title, pic, font and colors ... no confusion .. no dramatic explosions .. just true and honest feeling from a mature heart .. nice ride sir! thanks for sharing!
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

i am using your advice with my poems ... bold title and pic first ;) will continue to pursue classic.. read more
Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

How inspiring, Gene. : )
I am always here for you, My Friend.
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

i appreciate it .. I know how busy your life is .. so many pursuits :)



Reviews

Fading love has its own beauty in a stunning setting of earthly seasons. Flawless rhyming and meter to me again. Your words in this lovely poetry just delight your readers, Richard. Another gem from your ever-flourishing pen.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

Wonderfully and appealingly stated, Dear Divya,

Because I know of your depths, unders.. read more
although a bit sad, however the mood & words are captivating as always richard. 👍


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Um, Dear Carola 🍂
You always know the words to make my heart smile warmly and dance.
.. read more
Lovely rhyme; good choice of words to well describe the changing seasons and love, emotion, mood. I liked it very much

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

What a surprise, Betty!
Two reviews in a row … it must be my lucky day. : )
Your tak.. read more
Betty Hermelee

5 Years Ago

Richard, thank you from my soul ; you’re critique meant a lot to me . I am honored!
Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Well,
I certainly loved your poem, Betty, but you're welcome, because I thank you, too. : )
Wow....OK. Now THAT is what I've been trying to do from the start. THIS is a great write, I love your use of words and the way you can "see" this write. Again, WOW, great job. I will definitely be reading more, thanks for sharing this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Gosh, Dear Poet!
What an encouragingly bountiful review you've left for an olde bard.
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Pure Evil

5 Years Ago

This WAS a great poem....It's the way I've tried to make my poetry flow. For some reason, that is th.. read more
Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Most humbly, yours!
Wonderful words shared Richard. Words and artwork. Outstanding and thank you for sharing your words and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Hey, John! ; )
Good Sunday morning, my friend, and thank you immensely for such a bright and .. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Richard.
Sweetly written from the heart, thanks for sharing Richard
Mj 😇❤️

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

A basketful of blessings and my most grateful thanks to you, Mary Jo! ⁓ Richard 🍃
heavenscentgirl1

5 Years Ago

You are Welcome and most deserving Richard. Warm hugs ear Sir 🙏🤗
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Rye
This is such a wonderful, beautiful write Richard. Awesome job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Lady Rye,
It is a pleasure to write for You ⁓ Richard 🍃
Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

I see you've closed your account due to too many ads.
Google "AdBlock" and install it to be r.. read more
Nostalgic write. Takes your readers through life's seasons of content/discontent....to the present when we are aware that life goes on ...regardless! Factual write words that are so close to one's heart!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Beautiful, Kitty!
Your take and commentary on this rather melancholic piece touches and olde .. read more
kitty

5 Years Ago

So appreciative of your comments on my review Sire. You, have made my week! Thank you most warmly. D.. read more
awwwwwwwwwww well done ..lifts me up and takes me down ..a gentle but ..a roller coaster of loave and romance .. strung through the lines of seasons .. well done again i say! you have professionally put the whole picture together ..title, pic, font and colors ... no confusion .. no dramatic explosions .. just true and honest feeling from a mature heart .. nice ride sir! thanks for sharing!
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

i am using your advice with my poems ... bold title and pic first ;) will continue to pursue classic.. read more
Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

How inspiring, Gene. : )
I am always here for you, My Friend.
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

i appreciate it .. I know how busy your life is .. so many pursuits :)
Has a 19th century sound to it, maybe Thomas Moore. Would be interesting to hear it set to music, as many of his poems were.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John the Baptist

5 Years Ago

I personally like "Believe Me That If All Those Endearing Young Charms." Set to music, it is beautif.. read more
Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

I check that out, too.
Thanks, John. : )
Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

I enjoyed this rendition, by one of my all-time favorite baritones, Roger Whittaker.
https://.. read more

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Added on October 6, 2019
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